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L.I. 07-11-04 09:53 PM

L.I. vs Miss. Lyricist (Voting Closed!)
 
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L.I. 07-11-04 11:27 PM

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Miss. Lyricist 07-12-04 08:13 AM

Why the fuck did I have to get paired up with the dude that started the whole thing? LMAO

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134553
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...6914#post140691

L.I. 07-13-04 03:01 PM

She ugly as fuck.. her looks can’t even catch a eye…
Her name states perfectly.. how she cant get a guy…


For the dumb kids...
Miss = not married

:D

Miss. Lyricist 07-13-04 03:03 PM

Straight as a rod, swear to God, I don’t look at girls- don’t want their nookie
But when y’all read this verse I weaved, y’all believe, I enjoyed fucking this pussie

DeLeon 07-13-04 03:19 PM

L.I.

She ugly as fuck.. her looks can’t even catch a eye…
Her name states perfectly.. how she cant get a guy…

loool nice personal..i dont know how the fuck you break down a PL battle so here
nice punch played off her name and her pic...good solid punch

Punchline Rating:8.0/10

Miss L

Straight as a rod, swear to God, I don’t look at girls- don’t want their nookie
But when y’all read this verse I weaved, y’all believe, I enjoyed fucking this pussie

ummm ok..not feelin that 1st line why are you talkin bout your self..lol
2nd was ok but would of been A LOT better if you had a personal or something
in the first

Punchline Rating:5.0/10

Vote: L.I.

Ca'lam 07-13-04 03:38 PM

L.I:nice punch.. good personal.. play off her name... pretty creative... 8.2/10


Miss:lol... li didnt get that punch untill i read the last line.. i htink it was a good punch.. but it wasent enuff.. he had two 2 punches in his bar.. and this only had one.. id say it was a 7/10 punch.. Decent..

ima have to give my vote to L.I.. he came with more creativity and personal with it.. nice battle tho you guys...

Shadows edge 07-13-04 04:00 PM

v/ LI

For not sucking and coming stretched as hell.

Vote isnt counted due to lack of an explanation :)

Cocaine 07-13-04 04:06 PM

yeah L.I. gets this.. his bar was HOt.. and miss lyricist came stretched as hell.. i dont even understand her punch hahaha vote goes to LI

Triple_N 07-13-04 05:29 PM

Good Battle......Breakdown for L.I.


She ugly as fuck.. her looks can’t even catch a eye…
Her name states perfectly.. how she cant get a guy…

Nice clever punch there, nice wordplay in set up than you followed it with a hard wordplayed punch, solid drop son...I give it 8/10


Breakdown for Miss


Straight as a rod, swear to God, I don’t look at girls- don’t want their nookie
But when y’all read this verse I weaved, y’all believe, I enjoyed fucking this pussie

Ok this was really amatuerish punch, it was just all round weak, you attempted some wordplay in set up but then blew it in the punch, rookie, nookie, pussie, wussy leave these words out in any punch u think of cuz if u don't it will come out wack an played everytime....I give ya 5/10

Vote: L.I.

L.I. 07-13-04 05:32 PM

4-0...going for the 8-0 KO....up!

Durmil 07-13-04 05:40 PM

Vote LI

solid punch and personal...good play on her name the punch was there it wasnt choppy and flowed well 7.5/10

Miss-ur punch was stretched came kinda weak i dunno wasnt feelin it....5/10

*The~Star* 07-13-04 06:27 PM

LI-Had a pretty solid punch with the personals off her name

Miss-At first I didn't quite get what you was saying,but I got it,and it wasn't hard enough than the one LI had.Your bar wasn't strecthed.It just wasn't worded very good to me.

Vote= LI

Poppa Kap 07-13-04 08:28 PM

LI had an original line & good personal the way u flipped on her name.

Miss wasnt but pussy lines are soooooooooooo played.

Vote LI.

For$akeN 07-13-04 08:47 PM

LI's Punch!:

She ugly as fuck.. her looks can’t even catch a eye…
Her name states perfectly.. how she cant get a guy…

Description/rating:

ok well this was a very hard punch it had a good personal
and that is a very good thing as usual! your flow/syllable
was on point they lined up perfectly! also it was very original
and creative...and you had a personal with her name......

overall punch rating: 8/10

Miss Lyricist's Punch!:

Straight as a rod, swear to God, I don’t look at girls- don’t want their nookie
But when y’all read this verse I weaved, y’all believe, I enjoyed fucking this pussie

Description/rating:

well it was not a very good punch specially if you battling
L.I....the flow was not there.....due to the too much stretched
lines.....................and I didn't see any personals.............
also it was not very original/creative sorry.....

overall punch rating: 4.5/10


therefore vote goes to: L.I.


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