"I'm Sorry"
 

Ox laid this track to a beat that Khi made from a sample that came from I dunno WHERE the hell he finds these shits, but he sure finds em and kills em. I LOVE this beat. This song'll make a mofo water up if they're actually paying attention to it. Classic music, point black period.





http://therushent2.dmusic.com - "I'm Sorry"

Mhmm.. Beat is ill.. I think ox needs to tone down his vocals and be a lil less loud and a bit more melodic on these deep tracks mainly to suit the beat and vibe more.. But other than that, I can respect this shit.. Flows on point.. Lyrics are good.. Jus the loudness of the vocals is the only problem in this track.. But I guess thats jus his style..

Word.. And last emp is dope---------------

^^Nos, tghanks for the feed man. The track sounds 'loud' because of the clipping. It's not bad, but it's definitely not the lasre quality you normally here fomr me.

and LMFAO @ ass emporer :gfy:

Oh yeah, viagra to this thread.

*listening*

got that 3-6 mafia type of feel. the flow is a little too slow for me... and some of the emphasis was just a little corny, everyone got there own style but meh. it DID get better & pick up through the middle... im feelin what your sayin. keep practicin..

return the favor..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210622

Yeah, thanks for the feedback. Once again, this isn't me, this is my boy Ox. I guess I can see what you're saying about the flow.

I'll hit your link. Uno.

Upperage.

uh huh..uppin for all the cocksmokers who I left feed on and ain't done nada yet.

Beat: love it
Flow: pretty good
Rhyming: decent
Delivery: good


Overall:...some played lines and cliches..."part of the problem or solution"...eh eh...wuts next "Time heals all wounds"...nah


the prince shit is hot though...


7.5/10



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Listening..

The beat is fucking dope as shit.. the flow is pretty good.. I think his flow sounds fine, whatever.. his delivery is decent enough.. some of the lines didn't sound that good.. like, they weren't original.. overall, a pretty good track. it started out a little slow, but picked out and came out pretty nice.