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bone'zcollecterr vs timeless
no rules
1 round no limite on bars 3-0 tko 5wins no d/r vote and no crew vote |
iight lets go u spit first
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hello yo lets go dont pussy out on me now
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yo if u dont drop in 30 min ima drop ima up 4 votes son so hurry up i aint got all life time 4 ya candy a$$
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lmao ma boy timeless will be here 2 merk yo ass so b patient.IF and its a big IF u get past ma boy timeless u can step 2 me
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iight bet bring it son ima be herr
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iight herr im spit first cuz i gotta go so
Yo your rite u are timeless,cuz u know I be shootin hot rhymes like the heat form my piss// when i spit, its always raw shit that hits n breaks cartalige/ cracks ribs n snaps hips my lyrics tear apart a bitch// my skill iz crazy, ya nursrey rhymes aint never gon phase me/ amazing how this pussy think he hard, he soft like "pastrey"// an obvious beginner this cat got zero chances of winning/ like the "omega" to your "alpha" im tha endin to your beginning// this dipshit couldnt "spit shit" if his asshole was growin lips/ bitch...gon get his wig split wit precise disses that hit n never miss// perplex even tha best wit text that blesses wit mere presence/ give you a "~verbal~ lesson" like ~speeches,~ bitch "class is in session"// im relentless wit my lyrics and i aint never to be taken lightly.../ might come back n attack wit unexpected agression, n "strike" a bitch down like "zeus throwin lightning"// where's da fight in a lopsided strife where one "cuts" like a "knife" n da other stuck tryin'a bite... wheres da fun in a bitch droppin first grade spits, like "brown crayons" it lookin like "shit" when he "write"// switch da style a min... bitch yo text couldnt get "above mine" if it was hangin from a "crain"/ yo lyrics couldnt "flow sick" if you was "vomitin" out your brain// your verse couldnt get a "vote" unless you set up a fuckin "campaign"/ like "broke down cars" you go "nowhere fast," i sugguest you "change ya lane"// cus your rehitoricals be boring the whole forum they snorin.../ like "hittin stray cats wit a truck," this "pussy" im "flooring"// and ignoring the fact that this mac is unstoppable... gets you "fucked" in the "asshole" like "Jackson's" on top of you// what i "spit's" always "hard" i gotta be careful to not "break a tooth"/ what you spit be soft as ya cracked cartalige n "shreaded tissues"// when you die nobody gon "miss you" like exterminatin "rodents"// iight son uppin when your finish wit ya verse |
another merkin i'm feelin, dawg ya bonez is gonna be cracked
ya may collect them... but your just another "lost" artifact. ya wanna battle me bonez, lol...its pro to this no show, ho dawg ya mammas like a shot gun.. 1 cock, she ready to blow. mamma jokes aint my thing...... so ill beef on all ya foolz ya sed no d/r votes or crew,dum fuk, but also sed no rulez. your a joke faggot.... theres no1 in here holdin you aloft cough, the only bonez you collect, is the type that go soft.(cocks) i tend to get mc's killed in battles, theres no exceptins due ya keep postin hurry up and spit, but i dont pre-write like you. your the only bitch that gets d/r votes anyway... face facts so all the suger coted penutz , extract them from ya nut sacks. (bag of nutz) ive burnt ya up with ma hot flowz, and quick non pre dun wit i didnt need to even do good to win. thats why this is a shit spit. to all crews that r lookin to recrute me. this aint nowhere near.. my best, just thought i didnt need to elevate in this battle!! |
this dudes a biter ya'll and no i aint tryin to sway votes, look at dis,
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111991 he'll be banned soon, for that anyway, but i wouldnt be suprised if he bite this piece to, due to his non existant personals to me, anyways uppin for the mo!! |
uppin............................................. ...
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Bone..no ones gonna wanna vote on ya battles if ya write verses that long...And I doubt you could freestyle that in 13 minutes...suspicious to me....Anyway it was pretty whack..Got sick of reading it after a while..shit didn't rhyme...swear I've heard some of those metas before...or else their jus mad played....Structure an flow were all fucked up
Time-Neve come soft jus cause ya opponent did...Always come hard....you'll elevate faster...Anyway...You had some played lines too...but also some good meats and punches...ok personals... Win goes to Time....he had the harder punches and personals....metas is a tie even tho Bone had more...hehad mad played ones...\ Drop an honest vote here please...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113550 |
*sighs*
Why do people like this continue to battle? How many fucking lines do you want to spit moron... They where played as fuck... Didnt rhyme... You suck man... Im not going to let you go around your area thinking that your dope... So, my advice is to print this^ off your computer and glue it to your forehead so people dont get the wrong idea when you tell them your an emcee... Time... You dont get anywhere by coming weaker than normal... Dont do it again or i'll rip you just like a ripped him^... You had some nice enough lines... Good punches... But really... ANYTHING... Could of beat his shit... Which was blatantly pre-written anyway as there where no personals... This is the new wave of talent coming into this site... Man... We should be scared... v/ Timeless FUCKING PEACE OUT |
Its all been said.. way too much Bonez.. no one is seriously gonna read that line by line.. i read the first half an based on that iv gotta say that u really need to think up ya own concepts for punches.. try creatin metas that havent been used before as opposed to all those played ones.. there was no flow cos each punch was forced an stand-alone..
Timeless.. not ya best.. but it didnt need to be.. ur opener finished him off.. best punch of the battle.. witty an creative. VoTe = Timeless Drop a vote here a.s.a.p: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120 ...1 |
thanks il and the rest that voted so far.......uppin......
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actually i've won aint i, check the rules 3-0 tko, ill report it, but still uppin for now!!!
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