lil scrappy vs. mjust23
 

alrite lyke u said, 5 linez, pretty damn short, but i wanna battle b'for i gotz to go, i gotz school tomorrow, hah, letz to this, u spit first tho.

my bad, fucked up tha other one, ima have it erased, but spit you shit, gl dawg.

dawg u gonna check in?

IM A FORCE TO BE RECKONED WITH ON DA MIC//
DA HOLLOW TIPS LEAVE U LIT UP LIKE A LITE BRIGHT//
I'LL MAKE U RETHINK UR WHOLE DAMN PLAN//
I CAN EXPLAIN PREGNATEN YA MOMS, BUT CAN U EXPLAIN FUCKIN A MAN//
I'LL EXPLOIT UR SPNAL CORD AND CALL IT A RIP//
U MIGHT HANDLE DAT BUT CAN U HANDLE DA RUBBER GRIP//
AND WONT GET PAST 20 AFTER I EMPTY THE CLIP//
I USED TO METAPHORICALLY SAY I WAS FIRE//
AND WEN IM DONE CHARRING U, I'TLL LOOK LIKE I PUT U IN A DEEP FRIER. 1


:shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

lol, y try?

That bitch shit you be write’n, its got me laughn//
I think you should get an award! In tha King Of Wack Pagent//
Only wanted spit 5 lines? Dawg are u fuckn retarded?//
And after ya lose, don’t use tha excuse, Im new at this, I just started//
You know wut FUCK tha 5, and u want half hour for ya rhymes!!!//
Before you even done wit your linez, i been readn everythin in tha site 5 timez//
Tha rulez that u wanted, tha shit was unbelievable//
You must been so damn high when u wrote tha, cuse ya rhymes is unreachable//
Im sorry I went over tha limitz, I see u agree, ya rulez aint worth even goin//
I feel bad, im killn this herb… fuck it im done flow’n//

Uppin For Votes...................................

gl mjust, nomatted wut tha outcome, ya gotz my respectz for battle'n.

Same Hur Scrap, I Been Wantin 2 Battle U Though...

IM A FORCE TO BE RECKONED WITH ON DA MIC//
DA HOLLOW TIPS LEAVE U LIT UP LIKE A LITE BRIGHT//
4/10 coo punch
I'LL MAKE U RETHINK UR WHOLE DAMN PLAN//
I CAN EXPLAIN PREGNATEN YA MOMS, BUT CAN U EXPLAIN FUCKIN A MAN//
4/10 ok punch
I'LL EXPLOIT UR SPNAL CORD AND CALL IT A RIP//
U MIGHT HANDLE DAT BUT CAN U HANDLE DA RUBBER GRIP//
3/10 coo
AND WONT GET PAST 20 AFTER I EMPTY THE CLIP//
I USED TO METAPHORICALLY SAY I WAS FIRE//
AND WEN IM DONE CHARRING U, I'TLL LOOK LIKE I PUT U IN A DEEP FRIER. 2/10 lacks structure

That bitch shit you be write’n, its got me laughn//
I think you should get an award! In tha King Of Wack Pagent// 6/10 funny punch
Only wanted spit 5 lines? Dawg are u fuckn retarded?//
And after ya lose, don’t use tha excuse, Im new at this, I just started// 5/10 good one
You know wut FUCK tha 5, and u want half hour for ya rhymes!!!//
Before you even done wit your linez, i been readn everythin in tha site 5 timez// 3/10 ?
Tha rulez that u wanted, tha shit was unbelievable//
You must been so damn high when u wrote tha, cuse ya rhymes is unreachable// 3/10
Im sorry I went over tha limitz, I see u agree, ya rulez aint worth even goin//
I feel bad, im killn this herb… fuck it im done flow’n// i gota go with lil scrappy
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mjust23
dont type in all caps...its gay, and annoying...structure was weird...some of ur lines were good, some were stretched...flow fell off because of the difference in line lengths and such...no metas...wordplay was simple, and most of it was played...none of ur punches connected...no personals...

lil scrappy
structure was ok..a lot of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off because of the stretchness...no metas...wordplay was also simple, and played...a few of ur punches connected...personals were ok...[/b]

Overall
neither had a good structure...neither had a stable flow...neither had metas...both had simple, but played wordplay...lil scrappy had more harder hitting punches...lil scrappy also had more personals...so basing off of that...lil scrappy gets my vote...

VOTE - LIL SCRAPPY

Please return the favor on the link in my sig against TheOne

ayo letz keep up tha vote'n, i'll return all tha favors forreal, peace.

hmm i think its obvious who won.. anwyays

mjust-- like sum1 sed dont type in all caps and ur structure was off.. try harder punches too.

lil scrappy- good punches.. could be harder but good.. your structure was ok and sum of ur lines were funny so i liked that

lil scrappy won this shit

v/lil scrappy

plz return favor in my sig yall

ill vote on this if yall vote on mah battle wit nervez

they was hot, but imma give it to lil scrappy, cause u cant get on his level...lol...naw, jokes aside...scrappy came wit it in the first bar(1st 2 lines) and i had it decided