Daclassic vs Plutonium
 

Battle Rules:

10 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No quotes
no dr's
no hate
(If you bite I will find it.)
30 minutes to check in
60 minutes to drop

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 12:22 AM

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Plutonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 11:53 PM.

Daclassic has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-21-04 11:54 PM.

Here's 10 for ya

Just six months in your game, and you call yourself Daclassic//*
I say I want your ass kicked…Messiah lisps “I tnew ru ssa kcikd”//*
Your wack wordplay misfired, your weak punches flows elementary//
I leave your big ass stuck on “Par, roll”ing in a black penitentiary//(Parole)
My “full court press” defense have you “passed out” with no clue//
You can let “disaster strikes”, & still can’t get “a bolt from the blue”//
You think you’re “That much better?” I think you’re just a wanker//**
You think you gangster? I’ll just “Soul Clap” you like a doppelganger//***
No matter how "tight" you "sleep", you still can’t "live the dream"//
You can’t clean my “Ocean of Thoughts” even if you labeled “Chlorine”//

*check join date of Daclassic
**Messiah probably raps in his own language, or can't rap at all
***"That much Better"=check his sig
****stole it from E-Style, they can kiss my ass

^^^^I got the explainations wrong, forgive me.....

CHRYME SYNDICATE WE BACK!!!!

All this talk and chit chatter about me, Trust me it don't matter
Don't get me mad or even madder, I'd slap you -- but shit splatters
But I know what you after, Is it fame? Daclassic a benifactor
Only way Plutonium gets hot, If he's thrown in nuclear reactors
But watch me off this guy, A "W" won't be sought in his eyez
Plutonium loses so much on rapverse it seems to be unauthorized
Stretch lines? I notice you shrink the size to compact in bunches
An alcoholic will be mad, Your bars aint open to bring punches
So don't believe what you read, And Especially your crap verse
You the number one reason this site shouldn't be rap verse

Plain and Simple get the herbs out of here

uppin

Voted For: Daclassic

Classic got this...

more complex verse on the whole, etter structured, eassy to read, nice flow....harder hittin punches, maybe not the vocab of plutonium, but better wordplay, just the better verse all round in my opinnon..

uppin for votes.........................................

uppin can somebody vote damn

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This was feedback posted for Daclassic
 

lol.....just checking uot how you guys are doing.....since I can't vote ;)

This was feedback posted for Daclassic
 

checking it out.......... stay up D..................

^^^^daclassics dick riding crew

^^^^joking :)

uppin for votes...............................

Voted For: Daclassic

nice battle..................

daclassic u brought some gud shit, not ure best though. flow was hot although i dont see why u made the text so big. nice punches from start to finish, gud wordplay, some basic but a few complex rhymes in there, funny ass opener, i liked the line "I'd slap you but shit splatters". the play off of his name was clever to, all in all a gud verse.

plutonium u had a nice drop to and u came real close with daclassic. a nice flow all the way through, some gud punches that were hittin relatively hard, the opener though i didn't really like with the whole lisp shit, cuz sumone with a lisp wouldn't say shit backwards and stuff like you've done it, u had some gud wordplay and some nice complex rhymin although not as complex as daclassic, the one thing u shudn't really be doing is putting in "" to emphasize some of ure punches. also drop the // at the end of lines, that is herbish shit, and finally dont explain ure punches, cuz as i say, if u have to explain them then they aint gud in the first place.

overall a gud drop from both but i think daclassic took this one.

VOTE: Daclassic