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$$X-Pert$$ 08-05-04 12:33 AM

!!heres a demo!! need signing!!
 
heres some demo, for lyrics,

you need to check your rap skillz, rethink wut they're all about
you rap like fucking 50 cent with an 80% discount
re-do ur style, ur lyrics, and all your shit as gear
i dont care how sad u feel about this, bitch wipe ur tear
forever we rockin' the blue, its wuts true
come with a gatt with 9 bullets to fight ur 9-man crew
cuz my bullet is the dart, and the bullzeye is ur heart
i knew u were a pussy right from the very start
wait until u see my lyrics complete
i'll have u mistake me for Immortal Technique. 1

Copyright<> X-pert-90 <> come reply.

Chi 08-05-04 12:35 AM

thats tight u wanna join Franchise

GFX. 08-05-04 12:46 AM

The first bar was the dopest. Not a BAD drop. Just not as good as what I belive you are capable of. Flow was consistent, but vocab, multis and metas you should work on.

La Cosa Nostra 08-05-04 12:46 AM

ur not gonna get signed to any1 for droppin some text bro.. do audios..

KroNuz 08-05-04 12:55 AM

^--- Sin Said It Best....

Drastic 08-05-04 01:19 AM

^^^^^^^^^^Dats truth text aint gon get u shit......Trust

D-ICED 08-05-04 01:24 AM

damn another CRAB :laugh:

Mak 08-05-04 01:56 AM

Your lyrics aren't bad, but they aren't really good either. You have some ok lines but a lot of it is played out and too simple. But yeah...even if your lyrics were cold as fuck I doubt you'd still get signed by postin some lyrics...

roop 08-05-04 01:57 AM

nice, my new site, located in the sig, is look for talent like you, and to become a mod at my board all you need is 25 posts.

La Cosa Nostra 08-05-04 02:35 AM

^^link dont work.. and im pretty sure u get banned for postin links to other boards..

so id take that out if i was u...

KroNuz 08-05-04 11:17 AM

^- prolly not it takes forever... mods are lazy..


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