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.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:35 PM

Barz Of Steel, Leady, And Indeph Present...."ACUNAMATATA!"
 
Dont be fooled by the name hoes

No worries bitches, we're still the best :thumbup:



"Acunamatata"

Leady:


the writtens im spittin are rippin you cunts
im a first place MC so chances of u winnin are second to none
im an un-beleivable wordsmith i came to wreck songs
and leave ya crews dispersin like my name was tephlon
but i aint fuckin wit dat bitch.. ill jus kick it wit yall
da kid wanted beef so i started bringin it R.A.W
no-ones weaker than him im beatin this bitch
you cud drop rhymes in brail.. i still aint feelin ya shit
but fuck this shit because yall know im the best
ill start killin you cats......... just to show im a vet
im ruthless n shit bring u n ya clique n its a tragedy
call me an amputee cos ill destroy yall single handidly
its animal cruelty wit wat im spittin on you cats
call me a train because im known to rip it on a track
but im done n thats it now yall know what the crack is
likes the bombings in london this shit is tragic

Hook:

the next time your brain.. thinkin stupid shit...
its time to remind ya brain if you could spit.
cause remember I'm the same one who could rip..
you in a split second so choose it quick

Barz Of Steel:


I use pain to slay haters, aint nobodys name greater
Its like 'fat kids playin' Twister' the way Im the game breaker
I was made to hate fakers, so I come straight n juss nasty
Its like 'throwin' matches at Atari's' the way that I 'Pac heat'
Testin me's like 'sex with convicts'- itll get ya in trouble
Cuz I 'come through in the clutch', like drivin' stickshifts in tunnels
No need to trip or to stumble...cuz I also rock "automatics"
N rhyme so 'stupid dope' Im like retarded drug addicts
Its like pancakes ordered by fat kids-- Im bound to get stacks
My 'pocket's always full' Like QB's about to get sacked
Cant touch this text that I bring hard to disrespect with these mean bars
I 'prey on you fools' like ministers sexin with retards
Leave you left with obscene scars, Barz is rhymin the greatest
My words stay 'Sunnin' kats' like Phoenix signin' free agents
Each of my lines leave ya wasted, I cant help but demand respect
They only thought Jesus was perfect..cuz I hadnt set the standard yet

Hook:

the next time your brain.. thinkin stupid shit...
its time to remind ya brain if you could spit.
cause remember I'm the same one who could rip..
you in a split second so choose it quick


Indeph:

oh shit! indeph on dude, its more then mic check one two.
cause I'm countin sheep,niggas here slept on you.
I got rest when I'm readin,they expectin I'm leavin.
but question:will they all get depressed when I'm breathin?
fuck them fuck you you too,damn right I mean you.
I got used to usin these hand mics,but you gotta read too.
enjoy my text,for now,but those annoyed of deph.
cause get tricked cause I got some decoys void for death.
the last time I was called wack,was way back then....
I dropped some wack shit.....................so it aint happen.
so next time your lips get loose,forget the rules.
forget the law.this the era of when shit get raw...
and the principals....I'm finished with dealin with these nincompoops.
fuck you I got shit to do.15 years of ad-mi-ration....
YOU ARE THE 1ST TO READ THIS FAR.. so congratulations!

Hook:

the next time your brain.. thinkin stupid shit...
its time to remind ya brain if you could spit.
cause remember I'm the same one who could rip..
you in a split second so choose it quick

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:36 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199925

Link #1.......

BRB with the other one, but Im gonna make another post for it to Up my post count :thumbup:

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:37 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201035

Link #2 bitches and hoes.........

Indeph 07-24-05 05:39 PM

*takes credit for minor inclusion* I made the hook :)

leady 07-24-05 05:43 PM

lol ye dont be sleepin on dis u sluts

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:44 PM

I wrote the second verse :)

B To The D 07-24-05 05:45 PM

liked a lot funny name lol erm gud gud 8/10 keep up

Kawn Flixx 07-24-05 05:45 PM

This was a pretty decent drop..felt that you both could have used better wordplay..and vocab..All of your's had some nice punchlines..the whole thing was flowing together and it was really good.. Overall keep it up..and thankz for dropping a link

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:46 PM

It was my idea to drop the link, even tho indeph said we didnt have to :)

Anything for BC :love:

leady 07-24-05 05:48 PM

both??? lol im pretty sure 3 people dropped on this not 2 :p

Pro. 07-24-05 06:16 PM

Bars ripped this shit apart...I like that shit..nice punches an wordplay..

tha multi'd where nice....


Leady..you came out swingin but really had no punches,yeah I know it aint about punchlines,but your verse was nice...couldve used more multi's


indeph..That was nice...your verse was funny,I like tha congrats part..funny!

nice wordplay,flowed nice ...right along with ery'body on the open mic,it was tight..

would like ta hear an audio on this song..

8.5/10

Bars kill'd it...NICE :thumbup:

leady 07-24-05 06:28 PM

if i used more multies it wouldnt mhave been text friendly.. i mean i even dropped multies rhymin like 7 syllables lol but no doubt.. respect on da reply kidda.. btw did u understand all my lines????

Formation 07-24-05 06:31 PM

I Want In On The Remix Enough Said

TheCritic 07-24-05 06:33 PM

I understood all of em...an yeah..you came out wit multi's,but didnt follow threw.

it was nice,DiddicK... :thumbup:


No hatin just being a critic.(get it.)

~Tony Green~ 07-24-05 06:40 PM

Damn this was decent Barz did rip it up and Indeph my nigga holin it down for the chi ripped this bitch as well leady since you do audio and all I didn't think you would come as hard as you did even though you dissed my fam but you all was on your A game this was nice 8/10 if any of yall wanna collab holla!


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