My First One
 

YO SON WHAT I AM BOUT SPIT DOG MIGHT HURT YA
THE WAY i RAP THEY CALL IT HIGHWAY MURDER
THE 9 IT'S LIKE A SUPA SQUIRTER IT MIGHT GET U WET
i BEEN SHOT MORE THAN THEM NIGGAS IN IRAQ
bUT WHO AM I TO BLAME
WHEN PIG ON BLOK SEARCHING FOR ME/
LIKE I SUDDIAN HUSSIAN/
OR BIN LADDEN YO THIS KNEW/ i BEEN SHAGGING BEEN Rapping
sense I was a young buck now the 9 have nigga star struck
But i not talking about the one the sky
the one that fly and have people duckng for their lives
I cross nigga up like j kidd on live
yo i hear u was hard at clapping
But I got commando in the club that will kill your captin
To be honest i never up close murk a nigga
but i got punch line that hurt u nigga
I can't wait tull i make Jay z figgas
But dont get me wrong i anit trying to jigga my nigga
I trying to the great one
have niggas like '' used to hate him'' now I like him cause bitches want to chase him
I like a pencil i just erase them when they mess up
now i use the tec to clean the mess up
I bout to stop cause i getting bored now rest in peace to my nigga Tupic Shakure NOW

I Wern't Feelin' the Caps Lock At the Beginnin' lol Was an Aiight Drop... The Barz Seemed Stretched Towardz the End. It Wern't too Bad Fo Ya First...

Peace

Good looks Methane i make sure I PUT THAT CONSIDERATION
NEXT TIME GOOD LOOKS B

aight this was a simple rhyme...sorry but i wasnt feelin it...need to work on your complexity and shit...i'm an asshole critic as i say in a lot of replies you need to have good meats and similies in your shit dawg...keep elevatin though...one