Week 6 Middleweight Champion (4-1) Asasin Vs (5-4) Fatal Actions
 

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checkin in........

in, hope i can show this time

Ight...Here's my keystyle...
Match My barz...or try to.......

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Yo Fatal Why You Cock~Spit..??..Ya punches Not~hit...
Ya wanted To get in Phynam's Crew..So I let dis "Vet Work" and give my Jock~Licks..//
Check Ya Avey...There's Ya Forehead..So I Red~Dot..Spot~It..//
Too Bad Ya Spit notez..
My punches attacked...member 154 so bad..His Sig'z Broke..//
Battlin sIn..Think Ya Got A Problem..??
Like Anal Sex With Statues, Fatal regularly Hits Rock Bottom..//
I got em..So I Fade Ya Pace...
Ya Career is like the Universe in the Garbage, a Waste of Space.. //
Ya raps..Like Pre-teens..Only goin thru a phase..
Ur teeth are outta place..Lemme check ya dentals..//
Drop my verse and leave this fool "speechless" like instrumentals... //

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Short...but it's dope for a keystyle....
Yo jus match my barz...

damn I"m too busy,

keystyle, check it,
You battlin FATAL, doesn't that make you think you should a come iller/
Competition, emcee Percy Miller, I"m eatin his verse but he only brings fillers/
Now I"m blazin em, Middleweight Champion? Glad that this day has come/
Now I'll take the title, Sin couldn't have a strong joint wit a blunt in gymnasiums/
I spit wit flamin gums and napalm mucus balls, leave his brains all over walls/
If your Father was an away from ring referee you still couldn't have a win to call/
I know you heard of me, beat you till you burgony if you try to finish me/
Fatal Actions the main reason this faggot tried to change his identity/
YOu're too meek bitch, drop a single punch? please don't believe it/
Fatal dropped a verse wit meaning, now your really gonna be the king of deep shit/


OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Writers block, damn

Neither Verse Was All That But I Think Sin Got It With His "Rock Bottom" Line . . . That Had Me Laughing , And His Last Line Was Alright , It's A Played Topic But It Ended His Verse Well , F.A. Didn't Have Punches That Hit Hard , But His Flow Was Better i.e. ; "I know you heard of me, beat you till you burgony if you try to finish me/
Fatal Actions the main reason this faggot tried to change his identity"

But All In All , I Think Sin Had A Better Verse !

VOTE ::: .....sIn.....

although this was real close and neither worthy od deeming a middleweight champion my vote goes to sin cuz he came smoother and his punches were more creative.

vote=sin

u both seemed to only give a halfass effort but this shit was alright, tha rock bottom line was tha illest and hardest hitting, u both lacked real good punches so im givin it ta sin for his wordplay.

Vote-Sin
Peace.

breakdown
 

ASASIN::


Yo Fatal Why You Cock~Spit..??..Ya punches Not~hit...
Ya wanted To get in Phynam's Crew..So I let dis "Vet Work" and give my Jock~Licks..//
ok beginning..wasnt really feeling it...personal wasnt hit hard enough




Check Ya Avey...There's Ya Forehead..So I Red~Dot..Spot~It..//
Too Bad Ya Spit notez..
My punches attacked...member 154 so bad..His Sig'z Broke..//
again kinda a week segment..punch not hitting hard..you tried witha personal here..but if you reworded it probably would of been more effective



Battlin sIn..Think Ya Got A Problem..??
Like Anal Sex With Statues, Fatal regularly Hits Rock Bottom..//
pretty much filler here..nothing appealing and not hard hitting


I got em..So I Fade Ya Pace...
Ya Career is like the Universe in the Garbage, a Waste of Space.. //
this was decent but played concept



Ya raps..Like Pre-teens..Only goin thru a phase..
Ur teeth are outta place..Lemme check ya dentals..//
Drop my verse and leave this fool "speechless" like instrumentals... //
ok ending..not particularly hard..but ok



FATAL ACTIONS::


You battlin FATAL, doesn't that make you think you should a come iller/
Competition, emcee Percy Miller, I"m eatin his verse but he only brings fillers/
ok beginning, not really hard hitting..but not too bad..setup could of been better..and punch couplet thought could of came a little better..

Now I"m blazin em, Middleweight Champion? Glad that this day has come/
Now I'll take the title, Sin couldn't have a strong joint wit a blunt in gymnasiums/
not bad...


I spit wit flamin gums and napalm mucus balls, leave his brains all over walls/
If your Father was an away from ring referee you still couldn't have a win to call/
ok..punch was weak.



I know you heard of me, beat you till you burgony if you try to finish me/
Fatal Actions the main reason this faggot tried to change his identity/
good..but not effective



YOu're too meek bitch, drop a single punch? please don't believe it/
Fatal dropped a verse wit meaning, now your really gonna be the king of deep shit/
just like sins ending ,not too bad but not really hard..thought at this point you should of came hard..


both verses were ok, it seemed neither tried on this battle..but i thought assasin took this..with more punches..not saying they all hit harder but i found more punches in asasins verses than fatals..

fatal not too sure if you have time and shit..why dont you just write a verse..fuck keying it..more comes out of a verse if you put thought into it..but anyhow nice verse..


vote asasin.

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well this was a alright battle but some alright ish

sin

Battlin sIn..Think Ya Got A Problem..??
Like Anal Sex With Statues, Fatal regularly Hits Rock Bottom..//
I got em..So I Fade Ya Pace...
Ya Career is like the Universe in the Garbage, a Waste of Space.. //

Ya raps..Like Pre-teens..Only goin thru a phase..
Ur teeth are outta place..Lemme check ya dentals..//
Drop my verse and leave this fool "speechless" like instrumentals... //

those were your best bars

fatal

Now I"m blazin em, Middleweight Champion? Glad that this day has come/
Now I'll take the title, Sin couldn't have a strong joint wit a blunt in gymnasiums/
I know you heard of me, beat you till you burgony if you try to finish me/
Fatal Actions the main reason this faggot tried to change his identity/

thayt was fatal hardest hitting ish

but sin had harder hitting punches so that's why my vote=SIN keep working on your ish both of you

~1~

5-0...

uppin...

Thanx 4 votin peepz.....

aSaSin Got This With Harder And More Direct Hits...He Had An Aight Flow 2...Fatal Didn't Have Any Hard Punches, But His Flow Was ok..aSaSin Also Had Some OK Personals, Could've Been Better Tho...Both Came Decent, But aSaSin Came Better..

Vote - Sin

I thought sin had a better overall verse. Fatal came coo, but had some played out concepts in em. They were almost even, but I was feelin sin's punches more.

7-0....Looks Like I'm Retirin MiddleWeight Champion.....

But I'll Be Back...

My Last Win Was 8-0...and da one before...5-0...Now 7-0..

sIn Is Without A Doubt..Da Best Ever MiddleWeight Champion Of All Time.....

thanx 4 votes people....

.wUn.

yo, you can sign me out after this battle, i'm not active on the internet anymore