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Entertain - GKillaz ft. Speats
Yo this is my first track, take a listen and let me know what you think. :shoot:
www.soundclick.com/gkillaz song title: Entertain GKillaz - First Verse Speats - Intro, Hook, 2nd Verse Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232650 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232649 |
Listen'n lol....lil jon beats aight.....
1st: Lyrics is dope...like the shit u was sayin concept is nice....but average feel me gots to get more creative wit...lil more emotion' would'a made that shit...crazy.... Hook: No offense was wackk... 2nd: Lyrics simple....got a lil more emotion than the first dude....couldnt really understand you on some parts...but thats just the way u rapped it.... I hatin' doggy dont think i am im just here to help u improve on what u need to improve so dont take to heart bout me sayin the hook was wackk...not that it is wack just the way y'all spit it was wack.... but raw material is raw material feel me... so i hope to hear more from u homie.... over-all my rating 5/10 |
1st off...Speats...ur vocals come in a lil muffled
beat sounds like it's going to be hype let's see yea...typical southern club-type beat not bad...slick tho speat...flow is good...ur vocals need better mixing tho good rhyming...sounds almost freestyle like Hook: amateur-ish in the delivery...but I like the idea G Killa...work on articulation flow isn't bad tho...not at all decent soundin track bros ambitious 1 |
Listenin...intro is koo'..
yup your vocals are muffled fam use my mixin technique mayne...flow is good too g u been workin on that...nice multis goin on speats..lyrics basic... delivery is nice.. hook yeah like tha q said, amateurish, but idea is nice.. g killaz i thought u was speats?/..u sound exactly like him wtf??..lol im so confused whoever had that "cutting down trees line"...exact same as speats ... |
speats had that cuttin' down the tree line, I only did the first verse. lol, s'all good though thanks for the feedback. Maybe you though the first verse was his or some shit?..
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uppin for some more feed, rtf peepz......
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peepz owe me for droppin feed, I keepin this on top til I get some, I dont care I will take the good and the bad, just lemme know!
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aiight..
first - lyrics aight. flow is pretty decent. good shit on that. hook - its a nice idea. but just wasnt pulled off like it was planned to. second - lyrics remind me of carsonjt for some reason. flow is coo. not a bad verse. could use some work tho. overall track was a cool listen. could work on ya developin ya'll styles more, but we were all at that point yah'mean ? keep droppin |
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