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KronicK vs Da-Vinci
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Look::::: You attempt the impossible, when u step 2 the cardinal, a rap genius so sick I live in the hospital/ A audible verse, even in text theres no stoppin em, flow is a ball and Im Todd Pinkston i stay droppin em// Stay in ya place....ya flow is pointless, this battle aint a contest, I won with a ace/ Like Mase seek sum soul salvation, cuz my flow is Amazing yours is just a disgrace// My flow hit'chu and knocks ya sandals off, I stop ya shitty flow like charmin tissue, damn u soft/ My pistol got handles, so dont get ya ankles crossed, cuz when my shells hit'cha, u gonna start bleeding ragu sauce// And u gotta~be a fool if u thinkin u stopping~me, I'll deprive u of this win, nothing short of a robbery/ U probably got faith in ya flow, think you're a prodigy, but agaist me, u wouldn't have a chance in hell if u played tha Devil's lottery// Me and u are total opposites, nobody wants to hear your flow...yet they say my flow is def/ Whats worse, u diggin a bottomless pit, going nowhere, while my flow has actual depth// aight lets get dis shit going |
Out of town-sry, will drop when I get back, Thursday or Friday.
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When da fucc are u planing on droppin.....its been up 4 weeks now, c'mon mayne u wastin my time.
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Kronic my alliteration is alienating your chance of a winning situation
You beat'n me? Kid, ya must be mistaken yar flow is just lyrical incoordiation See my initial inclination is to deteriorate ya with humiliation So these peeps come to the realization of your lyrical incapacitation, B- real, It's a bit more than ironic, call'n yourself Kronic, the way ya just get smoked, But honetly Kronic, I'll be modest, ya SUCK so bad your alias should be "toke" See you hold'n down a win is like a six year old with his liquor, The only diffrence is, your loss comes up a little quicker Heaven-sake allow me to spell out and demonstrate your fatal mistak Y.O.U B.A.T.T.L.E.'N A V.E.T S.O.N, so your win column will deteriorate Your herbish verb's ensure the only "lime-light" ya gonna see comes from concentrate So ya put more "F-I-L-L-E-R" in ya verse than Pillsbury to compensate Alright, nice drop Kronic, sorry for bein so late, been out of city for awhile and busy with finals and all. |
Up'n this thing to day top of tha charts..er... chart...er okay forum.
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Lets get some votes on this shit. come on yall i'll return the favour.
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yo u both did good nice punches to both and personals to both structure goes to both to tha flow was good to but da vinci got this wit that vocab that was sweet man mmy vote goes to da vinci now return tha favor please
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131153 |
lol this was one of the weakest battles ive ever seen in my entire life of texteeing
damn but this is how i saw this battle Kronick holy shyt man your verse was wack ass hell son damn your lines were stretches as hell... your rhymes were wack ass hell.... your structure was horrible..... and Da-vinci ...easily merked you on almost everything....multies were bad becuase your structure fuked up everything ....Personals were really off and i wasnt feeling it overall your verse was really lame and you really need to elevate Da-Vinci Wow son another weak verse but it was enough to merk Kronic .....had nice structure which made your verse really easy to read not like Kronic....which was really hard to read... multies were iight nothing really breath taking or something that would catch my attention ....punchlines were good but i wasnt really feeling alot of em' ..overall your verse was pretty weak but it was enought to win this battle vote =Da-Vinci please return the favor in my sig PROPERLY thank you |
Yea, I hafta agree my structure was all over the map on that was, really hurt my flow I think. I'd also have to say that I was really struggle'n for hard hitting punches I figured I might have gone to the wire.
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yo vinci go vorte on this battle i need one more vote to get it closed vote honestly
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131153 |
Kronic had an alright verse. Not bad for a new b. But Da-Vinci ate you wit his vocabulary. That was a strong asset to his flow. It pumped up his verse alot and made it flow better. Vote - Da Vinci
P.S. - Return tha favor. Link in my sig. |
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hands down the battle goes to da vinci. his vocab lines punches and structure were all on point unlike kronik you need to go back to the books. Your lines were nothing compared to da vinci's, you're just a noob like me. you gotta take what I'm saying like a lesson, this will help us both in our future battles to hear things like this from others. So honest vote battle goes to da vinci.
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breakdown...
first up is kronick You attempt the impossible, when u step 2 the cardinal, a rap genius so sick I live in the hospital/ A audible verse, even in text theres no stoppin em, flow is a ball and Im Todd Pinkston i stay droppin em// 4 no punch whatsoever... Stay in ya place....ya flow is pointless, this battle aint a contest, I won with a ace/ Like Mase seek sum soul salvation, cuz my flow is Amazing yours is just a disgrace// 5 not really any punch My flow hit'chu and knocks ya sandals off, I stop ya shitty flow like charmin tissue, damn u soft/ My pistol got handles, so dont get ya ankles crossed, cuz when my shells hit'cha, u gonna start bleeding ragu sauce// 4 no punch come on kid And u gotta~be a fool if u thinkin u stopping~me, I'll deprive u of this win, nothing short of a robbery/ U probably got faith in ya flow, think you're a prodigy, but agaist me, u wouldn't have a chance in hell if u played tha Devil's lottery// 6 a little bit better Me and u are total opposites, nobody wants to hear your flow...yet they say my flow is def/ Whats worse, u diggin a bottomless pit, going nowhere, while my flow has actual depth//5.5 sort of a punch i guess... anyways not a good drop...but whatever... no for davinci... Kronic my alliteration is alienating your chance of a winning situation You beat'n me? Kid, ya must be mistaken yar flow is just lyrical incoordiation 8 now that's a punch... See my initial inclination is to deteriorate ya with humiliation So these peeps come to the realization of your lyrical incapacitation, 6.5 pretty good...nice wordplay B- real, It's a bit more than ironic, call'n yourself Kronic, the way ya just get smoked, But honetly Kronic, I'll be modest, ya SUCK so bad your alias should be "toke" 8 hahahahhahahah See you hold'n down a win is like a six year old with his liquor, The only diffrence is, your loss comes up a little quicker 10 ahhahaha nice shit..hahahahahah :laugh2: Heaven-sake allow me to spell out and demonstrate your fatal mistak Y.O.U B.A.T.T.L.E.'N A V.E.T S.O.N, so your win column will deteriorate 7 nice shit... Your herbish verb's ensure the only "lime-light" ya gonna see comes from concentrate So ya put more "F-I-L-L-E-R" in ya verse than Pillsbury to compensate 7.5 good shit nice drop v- obviously davinci... ANYWAYS I TOOK THE TIME TO VOTE ON YOUR BATTLE PLEASE VOTE ON MINE IN MY SIG>>>thanks |
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