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L.I. 07-18-04 09:51 PM

SPuL VS Limited Edition
 
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SPuL™ 07-21-04 09:11 AM

who is this guy... checkin' in.... j/p :cool: good luck Limited

SPuL™ 07-21-04 01:35 PM

yea, I was bored, so I'll jus post now:

Your rhymes are a written request to lose... aka yo petition
Your punches aren't good no more. Yo skill's a Limited Edition

L.E 07-21-04 11:11 PM

Check...wow a close one...almost forgot about this....checkity check...

L.E 07-21-04 11:15 PM

A'ight yo...

SPul...you just anotha one of those hurtin' vets...
I leave you hurt n' bruised...judgin' by ya purple text

Poppa Kap 07-21-04 11:22 PM

Spul gets this. For three reasons...

1.)Spul had a more complex punch that hit hard on ur name
2.)leave his text purple? u mean black & blue...i know what ur gettin at but it doesnt quite work
3.)those types of lines are played.

Vote=Spul

FlowIntelligent. 07-22-04 12:58 AM

spul: your punchline was decent kinda weak but decent...good name play first line was weak (the set up wasnt there) i think you coulda had something hotter but it was alright

overall : 5/10

limited edition: I wasnt feeling your set up line either and i dont think you should have even put that in you should have made a different set up line...i was feeling your last line it was pretty good

overall : 5/10

tough decision SPul your better than that gharabage it didnt even sound hott..L.E your better than that garbage also neither of you had a set up line and i think both would have been hotter with one...

vote: SPuL BARELY!!! so dont get happy about this win if you do win cuz your punch was weak

Ca'lam 07-22-04 01:30 AM

i dont wanna jump on the banwagon here, but.. there right.. L.E, i think you should said something about how feminine his text was or something to that extint if you were gonna talk about his text color..




Spul: Decent punch.. woulda been put together different ly, but idea was there..

L,E:that whole bruised text thing is a lil bit played.. if it was worded a lil more cleverly, you woulda won it even tho it was a lil played.. Could have worked.. i just i didnt think there was to much there...

im tired... im prolly gonna come back tomarow and edit and explain more on this vote.. for now im just keying what ever comes to thought...

Vote:spul

YaYo 07-22-04 05:25 AM

spul got this i thought....
SPul had better punches and made more sense. I felt it more.
Limited editions bar was played a lil. Nice punchlines though

Vote: SPul

SPuL™ 07-22-04 09:19 AM

aiight, uppin'. 4-0 me

Tha~Pro.DiGy 07-22-04 11:42 AM

a yo i give limited edition this one
b/c: ur flow was off
his was complex not only a lil puch it had a personal andd some werdplay
but really they both could improved ill show u all when i enter in the next one but limited took this one

L.E 07-23-04 12:46 AM

A'ight...4-1...shit haha...

Triple_N 07-23-04 02:33 AM

Both punches were really wack........

Spul it was a dectn punch, decent wordplay, but overall weak punch, I seen you drop harder than that, so I give ya 6/10

Limited...I thought that after spul dropped weak like dat you'd take it but you didn't, yuou dropped a weaker punch, it had a attempted personal but it jus didn't hit hard so I'll give ya a 5/10

Vote: Spul

B.X.P 07-24-04 01:46 PM

spuls punch hit a little harder and it made more sense....
limited punch lacked creativity....Purple? its black and blue..so you messed up...

v/spul

Poppa Kap 07-26-04 11:37 AM

6-1 Spul

SPuL 3 points

Limited 0 Points.


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