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Feeble Minded 02-02-04 07:20 PM

Token (1-0) vs. Derive (0-0)
 
Verses due: 12 am Eastern, on Friday Night.
Wednesday check ins are due by. Read Rules.
don't come wack..why ? because loser's out

Token 02-02-04 09:04 PM

In.

Koncept Vs. Mentill
Allegory Vs. Jacent

Lirael One 02-03-04 09:44 AM

"Blah, you wack .. never really stand a chance,
Nigger, i'll leave you hanging from a tree .. like a branch" O_O
^ That was me in '94 .. but its kinda funny somehow,
.. cause even back THEN, i was better than you are NOW!
Scrawny fuck .. one punch could knockout this brittle thing ..
.. & leave Stars 'round this Tits head .. like Janet Jacksons nipple ring
Tryna spar with god? Dawg, none of ya lines move me
plus ya face got 'nuff Acne ..
.. to supply the last Looney Tunes movie
Kid tell me im your idle and shit .. this fat geek,
.. was more upset than me, when i fucking lost last week.
You think your some veteran now?
.. please nigger, you got it wrong son
Id call ya Bluff .. but you'd prolly take it as a come on = /

Bye nigger.

Token 02-03-04 09:57 AM

The hell?

I'm against Derive not Camarac.

Feeble Minded 02-03-04 06:27 PM

battle against cam this time, you'll get the win either way - its more entertaining to watch a battle than a no show.

Lirael One 02-03-04 06:34 PM

Yeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssssss

Niggers Bitched Bout Me In The Mod Lounge And Shit To Get This Up So Post You Fucking Gay Alias. - I Saw The Kid Say Who You Were Before Phoebe Edited His Post ; )

Token 02-03-04 07:17 PM

Okey Dokey.

I'll drop when possible.

Token 02-06-04 08:16 PM

Lirael (n); Mythical Wizard of Writing

Maybe ur dope.. Perhaps u are ILL.. You just may be elite
You're using all your might ^..
..But how can your legacy be real if your name isn't believed!
But fuck it, Let's break the ice.. Have a little riddle perhaps
Here's a joke..
..Hint, the L and O are in CAPS!
Feeble wanted this battle to be dope.. I even bet him
But I lost that gamble..
..The minute YOU checked in!
You brag about your posts.. But we all know you as phoney
Like you said..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lirael One
No one cares about you enough to remember some bullshit thread you made, homie ..

You steal to win.. Next time.. Bite your tongue, kid
Apologies..I was wrong to say that..
..I'm sure it was someone elses tongue that you bit!

Lethargic 02-06-04 08:48 PM

Cam - Opener sucked, You used a Janet Jackson line, Acne line was forced and failed horribly, you used a fake personal, and you misspelled idol.

Token - Not a bad verse, started off slow but picked up in the end with some nice personals. Closer was nice.

Vote ~ Token

KoNcEpT 02-06-04 11:21 PM

ahha - Word I Agree With Lethargic On This
One. Don't Ever Again Use A Jackson Line
Period No Matter What Or Which One It Is.
The Acne Line Was Meh...Token Had A Solid
Verse Through Out Kid Just Came From Outta
No Were And Became Dope. Keep Up The
Good Work Kid....

V/Token

Token 02-06-04 11:26 PM

Thank you. That is much appreciated. I'm continuing to elevate as much as I can. I'm trying really hard.

Allegory 02-06-04 11:42 PM

hmm..i really dont want to vote on this battle....

cause i know Cam will bitch...and i aint even trying to argue with him....

and plus i got to vote on 3 battles..and i've only battled on 1....

sooo...Lirael...verse was sub-par...def not great...more played than anything....

hmm...u had decent wordplay....not nuffin great...

the acne line was ur best line period...

Token...verse was Ok..that's it...Ok....u stayed consistent...

and had a few decent punches...closer was ehhh...ya know...fairly decent...

that alone was enough to get the win...

Vote - Token

Note! * if u feel this is a hate vote..then dont count it...its whatever....
i agree with everybody else on this one..yep...Gh05t! *

KoNcEpT 02-06-04 11:44 PM

Lol ^ Sheeeit His Closer Was My Favorite Line.

Baron God 02-07-04 10:42 AM

OH NO I LOST TO THE GOD LIKE TEXTCEE TOKEN HOW TRAUMATISED I AM!!!!

ROFL


great.

Token 02-07-04 05:02 PM

Well aren't you mature.


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