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MARVOLoUsJ1009 Vs. Limited Edition
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No Hate D/R Crew Votes 5 bars (10- Lines) or w/e... Check in, and I guess he wants to spit first. |
no need 4 a check in...
limited edition? we all dis fella-suck,but when shots from dat beretta-buck // make like "bugs bunny playin dice with daffy" u "bet-a-duck" // who eva kop dunns-cd's?,i dont wanna hear about da pump-he-squeeze // his moms a hoe she always get "caught under-cover" like "dumb dt's" // keep talkin but when u lay-bleedin,few seconds later u aint aint-breathin // after i put ya "brain on ya sun" and you could call it "day-dreamin" // ya verse's corny so who u was often-killin?..but i'll leave u ina coffin-chillin // then make like "nas" and "drop ya god son" but its gon be off a buildin // fukk all dis dogg y should rap when i could grab ruga's & pome trey's // u commite crimes??? im happy 4 u is a "kon" "yahhhh" // nope u a "college drop out" dat live in da crib and do whut ya moms say // quick...key style or howeva ya'll say it |
A'ight...check it... At the age of 19, I light you up wit a match and gasoline I hear you scream...called me out, anotha win I will redeem Lyrically...I crush you...bitch...your already history I will end your misery...there is no reason you rap ridiculously You must have guts...taken on me and Creativitie in one jump You just a poor chump...but for bravery, I give you a thumbs up :thumbup: No...I ain' a vet...but already have taken the entire net I will win, wanna bet? No mystery when you don't have 3 wins yet Flow shitty...your punches are not even close to witty Ya better leave this place... ...And head back to New York City... |
A'ight...uppin' for votez on this shit........................
Uppin' 1. |
word.....can we get some votes ppl.....................
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VOTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE....and drop ya links
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ima give this to marvelous he had better flow although his structure wasnt that good he still have flow
limited edition i just wasnt feeling your flow . your structure was koo but i just wasnt feeling it this time B My Vote Goes To Marvelous |
goodlooks....................................vote ppl battles shouldn't stay up longer than a day on dis site
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Limited verse was alright not gonna hate but Marv was much better! It seems like limited took the day off. Marv had me with this Line:
keep talkin but when u lay-bleedin,few seconds later u aint aint-breathin // after i put ya "brain on ya sun" and you could call it "day-dreamin" // Vote= Marv |
goodlooks............dunn.....................uppi n
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WHAT THE FUCK?
Marv-u came a lil hard...but talkin about killin some1 or w.e isnt always gonna win u a battle....when u diss em be creative make it funny...sorta brag a lil about how ur better and the other kat sucks...ur flow was good and so was structure no doubt...ur vacab is definately there for sure...u just need to sorta mix up ur punches a lil...from funny 2 serious 2 funny again...try keep people laughin Limited-ur flow was good...very easy to read which i like..i understood it...ur punches i thought were funny thats why u get my vote...the thumbs up thing killed it for me..ur vocab isnt bad either...i guess thats why ur in UE cause they like the way u flow..u made evry punch personal almost...thats good vote-LIMITED EDITION |
A'ight thx...yo, hit this shit up...
Uppin' numero 2. |
damm i 4got about dis shit...aneway can we could some votes rapper's
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yo yall niggaz is strait booty......come get at me wwit that cheap shit ill cut ya head off an shit down ya throat
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marv killed this easy.....i dint really get his opner but his shit got better punch wise structualry....flow cud do werk in sum areas.....Limited had a flow, but shit were they punches...bout as hard as a flacid dick dawg, ya need to put mo thought ito em......
vote marv- return the favour........http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120747 |
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