fiori vs. The Duce
 

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Topic: Converted Lifestyle

checkin in....

checkin in....

aight im dropin.....

www.soundclick.com/offthedockproductions

"Meant To Be"

its a lil over 2 min but it has a 35 second intro. wit no lyrics so its realy under 2 min. anyways a slower soft track wit some feelin and saddness. Put a lil of my own life into this... aight Please no hate Holla.

shit is kool.....didn't get time to record second verse tho so i just had da 1 dun......
i can record da second verse 2morra and edit it and get it up.....
i posted wot i got cos i aint gettin bann'd.....

"Converted Lifestyle"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/fiorimusic.htm

Lyrics:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/Lyr...9&songid=780897

peace

I liked the singing on Duce's part, but Fiori took this. More rappin, better flow and better quality.

Later...

Listening to; Duce:

Beat is sounding ok, don't really like these, slower beats. It aint my type, but it fit the subject very well. Eh..I wasn't felling ur first 10 seconds of rapping, the singing is dope. You need emotion, sounds like no emotion in you..Lyrics are ok, delivery needs improvement..Hmm..once again, the singing is dope, i like it. You rode the beat fairly well..Since its a real slow beat.. Wasn't feeling the verses much..i donno, just wasn't feeling it...it was ok..

Other then the singing, i wasn't feeling anything else..

6.8/10.

Fiori:

Nice intro.. Beat is dope, i like it. Your voice is very layzie, which is good, on tracks like these..You had fair emotion.. Eh, you need better delivery..Kinda simple..Hmmm..I like the hook, it's dope..Love the ending, when u say the hook..Liked it..Lyrics were ok..short.. You had a lil better creativity, even though you didn't have singing..

7.1/10..

Both had same quality..nothing better.

But, fiori took this. Word. Just felt his better.

Improve both.

the duce- u need to improve ur flow, singin is kool... put a lil more emotion, n it sounds so laid back... its a lil to slow for me, n it was broing to listen to it... i give this a 6.8/10

fiori- love this beat by smidi, ur voice is wierd, kinda reminds me of aesop... u did mumble on some parts though... i give this a 7/10

my vote goes to fiori

my vote goes to

*listening*

iite duce

haha i actually like this beat *waitin for the drop*

ok ummmm i really didn't like the song. u stayed on topic no doubt. But the singin is kinda ehh.....Lyrics weren't really striking for me. I think u should've approached this different. It didn't do u any good.

quality-5
topic-10
flow-6
delievery-4
presence-5
overall-30/100

flori

beat is ummmmmm
not good

chorus i'll give u some props. not real good but catchy and it does ur beat some justice. lyrics are nice. Topic is crucially done. Song is well written. Quality is ass mic presence wasn't there. neither was ur confidence. Delivery stinked.


quality-6
flow-6
delievery-4
presence-5
topic-10
overall-31/100
u barely beat homie in my eyes only because u just seemed to actually wanna win. Both verses were weak though

vote-fiori

ma vote goes 2 fiori on this he had a doper verse than duce.

duce i found it hard 2 understand ya lyrics as i felt that your beat was louder than your voice,i thought dat was kinda wack, on the other hand i felt fiori's voice has changed drasticaly since his previous audios and his voice was alot clearer.

both of you were victims of mumbling but duce urs was contstant especially ur first couple of secs of your rappin...

anyway fiori gets ma vote on dis 1

duce:

nice track, i liked it...nice beat......but ya voice didnt show emotion......but all in all nice...

id say 6/10

fiori:

also nice beat......voice fits............quality was the same as duce......i also liked it...nice bridge or hook...

7/10

fiori took it....

good shit of both...

peace!

Duce - coo beat for what you were goin for. singin..doin ya own thing, thats straight. also i like how you stayed on topic without throwin the topic in our faces.

Fiori - like your beat more, hard to understand you. ummm yeah. dont like how you dealt with ya topic.

i gotta go with Duce. He wasnt afraid to do somethin different. He stayed on topic in a nice way and i could always understand what he was sayin.

oh yeah sombody, anybody vote on mine and prophits topic.

vote: Duce

peace.

Okay Duce. Your hook was fuckin ill. You had awesome sound quality which is the biggest factor in my book. After i listen to your track the hook, "was I meant to be any more than me," gets stuck in my head; That is a good thing. Yo lyrics were definately on topic... Beat was alright... Kinda happy soundin beat..lol.. Overall a good track.

Okay Fiori... listening... I dont like the beat... you have too much of a phaser on that flute.. or whateva that instrument is... but nice melody to the flute... The phaser just kills the flute, ruining the track in my point of view... I would put some reverb on it and maybe a lil chorus, and throw a stereo plugin on that flute for sho'....... I like how you are layzie with your words but you slurred a couple of them...makin the vocalist sound like he's "special" or something. that was cool how you spit quik for a second... do that more often... .. you got to loud on that last "but it always seems to rain at the end.... quite that down a bit... this is something i wouldnt listen to driving down the road... but worth improving on... good topic..

My vote goes to Duce.

Fiori's spit was more up beat and everything where duces to me was nicer because it was slowed down a bit givin it more of a emotional feel in my opinion..This was close but my vote goes to Duce....Good job yall

fiori wins. props to both for just showin up lol. Good Luck in week 2.