traxik vs SLicK~SKiLLz
 

Battle Rules:

5-15 lines
No Crew Votes,dr,hate
No Recycling
No Biting,feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-04 at 12:37 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

SLicK~SKiLLz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 12:08 PM.

knock, knock, knock!
who is it?
bang bang bang!

~trax~ what was u thinkin dont u know ill hang ur body on the fag ~racks~
sayin ur takin this shit over ~soon~ (in his profile) ill make u get merked more then kenny on the south park car~toon~
ill run ur little world over with a tonka ~toy~ even though hes 16 he still raps like a lil white ~boy~
my rymes are spittin sharp ~objects~ kill ~faggots~ slayin ~rejects~ standin on the street sayin WHOS ~NEXT!~
hey cat ur wastin my ~time~ dont u know im sicker the the ~lime~disease
iller then eatin raw ~steak~ wastin this nigga so fast he wants a ~break~
ur ~fake~ this is a e-z win ima ~take~ i dont even need a heat ill stick u in the oven a ~bake~ your wannabe ~ass~
heres a lil advice quit rappin and go back to fishing for unexisting ~bass~

its supposed to say stick u in the oven to back not a bake my bad bro gl man peace

what the hell

right im confused but yeh, im gonna accept in like 5 mins cos im off 2 get my lunch

gud battlin bro

Traxik has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-04 12:29 PM.

20 minutes, just think, destruction that fast,
theres no contest here, this aint even a clash,
Now if you dont understand that, you's illiterate bitch,
I dont care anyways, wastin time battlin this snitch,
So you a medium build? thats internet talk for Fat Fuck,
And you from hell? thort that heat would burn that ass off,
But hey man all's fair in love and war, but this aint war,
Its called bullyin, bitch run yo ass back out the door

Fuck that, lol keyed it up in 5 minutes, Good luck man I came weak so neva mind

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

No really ood punchlines in this battle or personals, so as far as disses and rhymes slick took it.. he had better wordplay and better disses.. traxik didn't rhyme sometimes, like Fat fuck and ass off doesn't rhyme.. slick came with some nice lines too that dissed him harder so slick gets my vote..

return favor with a vote in my thread, thAnx...
here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143024

fat fuck and ass off do rhyme

think about it bein rapped

This was feedback posted for Traxik
 

sorry, but your vocab was a bit basic to me like - "door n war" and "snitch n bitch". try to up your vocab man. no beef, just advice.

Voted For: SLicK~SKiLLz

Slick Skills Took This With Harder Hittin Punches and Better Wordplay.

Lose The Quotes and All That Shit....Its Herbish To Point Out The Rhyming Words and Punches.

Besides That Just Elevate ...You Got Potential.

Traxik....You Just Need To Quit Rapping.

Vote - Slick-Skills

~R~

lol I suck, so fuck off and get a job

thnx for the votes keep-em comin and im free agent i need a crew lol if u can hook me up

Voted For: Traxik

give it 2 TRAX his structure
was better which made his
flow better no real punches
but ok battle
v/TRAX
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