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S. Lena vs Jayson
Battle Rules:
6 lines No Crew esVotes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-06-06 at 09:44 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
S. Lena has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-06 10:37 PM.
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I'm ill, kid. I'm always spitting shit so insane
So watch me son Jay, like I was flippin' your name You wanted to do more lines, but 6 is more my taste I tried to dumb it down a bit, but your verse beat me to the chase! Your raps are all garbage, kid, you'll never make it big and you ain't flirting with wackness, yo, you're married to it kid! |
Jayson has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-06 10:39 PM.
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S. Lena???
youll probably win.......sike from start you finished dude worse then the system, that has more wins then you got your vocab from payless, we all know there generic you must be premature, cause your verse is so pathetic kreminds me of a toilet cause i'm shitting inside this dude get a navigator for rap, oh shit even that cant guide you |
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Voted For: Jayson
youll probably win.......sike from start you finished dude worse then the system, that has more wins then you vs I'm ill, kid. I'm always spitting shit so insane So watch me son Jay, like I was flippin' your name i think Jay come harder out of the 6 lines hha...his hit harder.. and the first line beat most of yours nutt...but watch the Self Glory..its not very efective |
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This was feedback posted for Jayson
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Voted For: S. Lena
youll probably win.......sike from start you finished dude worse then the system, that has more wins then you WAK.. got your vocab from payless, we all know there generic you must be premature, cause your verse is so pathetic WAK.. kreminds me of a toilet cause i'm shitting inside this dude get a navigator for rap, oh shit even that cant guide you WAK... I'm ill, kid. I'm always spitting shit so insane So watch me son Jay, like I was flippin' your name WAK NAME PLAY BUT ATLEAST ATTEMPTED.... You wanted to do more lines, but 6 is more my taste I tried to dumb it down a bit, but your verse beat me to the chase! GOOD PUNCH...KINDA... Your raps are all garbage, kid, you'll never make it big and you ain't flirting with wackness, yo, you're married to it kid! WAK... Assaulted Nutt gets my vote for having a small concept of what it takes have a battle. had A lot of weak punches in this battle and played concepts and nameplays for only 6 bars but w/e. V/Assulted Nutt Return the Favor in my battle with Stackmann. pc. |
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Voted For: S. Lena
im going to have to go with assaulted nutt on this joint. It was kinda of close, until i re-read assaulted's opener. that was the deciding factor for me. my fav barwas You wanted to do more lines, but 6 is more my taste I tried to dumb it down a bit, but your verse beat me to the chase! jayson's verse didnt really make me feel like he was doin any damage nah mean. both of yall structures and flows were good, assaulted nutt just had better punches my vote goes to assaulted nut yall playas hit me back on my joint |
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Voted For: S. Lena
youll probably win.......sike from start you finished dude worse then the system, that has more wins then you [bold]No....dude thats played/whack 0/10[/bold] got your vocab from payless, we all know there generic you must be premature, cause your verse is so pathetic [bold]Pathetic/premature..off topic no punch 0/10[/bold] kreminds me of a toilet cause i'm shitting inside this dude get a navigator for rap, oh shit even that cant guide you [bold]Decent could have worded it better 4/10[/bold] Overall: Im not impressed man you came whack and weak no hate just think you need less generic lines and more lines wittier and with meaning....you had 1 good attempt at a punch but it was played and worded badd....ehh overall like 3/10 dog I'm ill, kid. I'm always spitting shit so insane So watch me son Jay, like I was flippin' your name [bold]Nice name play ...kinda played 4/10[/bold] You wanted to do more lines, but 6 is more my taste I tried to dumb it down a bit, but your verse beat me to the chase! [bold]Not bad...again kinda played but 5/10[/bold] Your raps are all garbage, kid, you'll never make it big and you ain't flirting with wackness, yo, you're married to it kid! [bold]Not feeling it really meh 1/10[/bold] Overall: Much stronger verse than you opponent though you had some played concepts they were still wittier and more appealing imo. Keep doing your thing this was a 1 sided battle no doubt v/s. lena rtf please and thank you |
Voted For: S. Lena
dope lil verse. the first 2 bars were my fav's. i mean, not really much to this battle. the other cat didn't have too much shit cept platy'd material. so yea.. Assault gets this shit pretty easy to me. v/ Assulted Nutt |
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