Fuck RV
rhymes-fluently-potent these hoes,...'just-skip-postin' take time ta consider ya health//
Dont come to BS talkin shit bitch cuz tha 'registration process',...is tha only way u makin a name fo ya self// punches-get-delt wit deadly accurace,...harass me!!! an find out Blaze dont fuck around// but dont tell BS 'PBB put me on my ass',...when u where 'layin face down'!!!// whata fuckin clown,u want what-now,...shhhhhhhh dont make no noise// or i'll peel back tha 'skin from ya head ' like 'uncircumsized boys'// damn man, 'ya turned me to peter pan'*** rockin wit this 'shadow of mine//' face-it when tha 'heart monitor stops' be tha only time u droppin 'staright lines'// jeez my neez take it eez dont be disrespectin tha crews and the boss// cuz like 'leaves on trees in da winter'nigga you will 'fall off'// |
you fucking suck. even your structure is fucked. why do you put // at the end of each bar? is that so we know what words you're trying to rhyme? go back to your playhouse faggot.
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I can't get on you like him It was decent but does need work. Your structure and multies need work. Everything else was ok.
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damn man, 'ya turned me to peter pan'*** rockin wit this 'shadow of mine//'
face-it when tha 'heart monitor stops' be tha only time u droppin 'staright lines'// Best line. The structure needs work like duke said but it was decent. Not the best but not the worst. Keep banging homy. |
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