What's going on by: Rippa Boi
 

love hate violence and pain
crazy nigga that is what driving me insane
but that's all that is left in the world now a days
and the ones who have faith in it somhow get put in graves
what are we surposed to do with a world full of comotion
that has only one motion
what is down and is almost gone
tell me what is going on
why is it we cant stand to gether and be strong
but be divided and weak to the point we cant even get along
not to mention the next breath we take may be our last
cause as we walk past some other nigga may put a bullet in our ass
every day a brother dies
and every day mothers cries
why cant we do right in our lives
why do tears of love hate violence and pain fall from our eyes
someone tell me before it is to late and we are all gone
people tell me what the hell is going on


peace

you know what that was pretty good man, you got some skill

The topic was a good one, I thought that you could of elaborated a lot more and showed more emotion. Your wordplay was very boring, and I lost interest. your open and close were your best lines. but very mediocre.

that was good, acctually stayed on topic ;)