Premanition vs. The Revelation
 

Checking in, px

check

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im droppin tonight rev so match me

pow

And That Was That
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Anger skipped a generation cos ya mums a violent slapper
And ur her next like durex, you just a ‘throwback’ wrapper
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‘throwback’ = note under name
wrapper/rapper
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Punch = Work It Out

If you're the future man, then Hip Hop is through,
Why do you drop wack? Guess cuz it's all you can do.
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Not that hard. Premantion means a glimpse of the future.

Prem- set up line? lol...i dont get it ''slapper''....the hell is that man?
Second line was straight..........could of been more creative with ya wordplay.

Rev-
Not a strong punch, set up line was good....then the punch was kinda basic...but, you still got this.

Vote-rev

vote revelation better punch hit harder setup was good kinda basic but it wins

V./ Prem

Close, ut was feelin the wordplay on prems.

Revs was aigh too.
No hate.

pretty good hear.......premanition had a more complex.....one.....for text......revelation would've been dope...but it was just a little soft.......if ya'll were in the streets no one would've said ooooo to either one of these...but since were not...were on thenet......

vote-premanition

wow this sucked

v/rev

vote: Prem

both of them could of been a little bit better, Rev sorry man... ya punch was just to basic

/prem

better concept and better worded punch

v/ prem
better concept, lil more to it
rev was good but missed by a hair

v/Prem

He came Less Wak

prem decent line i said something like that before i really aint like revs line at all
vote-prem