Week 2: Jay-Brook 1-0 .vs. Jonathon 1-0
 

check.. mate.. your done son.

sure.............uppy's

I was gonna leave RV...but easy wins like you bought me back.
because nothing in life is free......and your sister taught me that.

An only child, but shit... I'd leave you guessin, I'm bustin this foo
They say I'm sweet & mild, but I'll smash ya, and bring a concussion too
I play with your brain, beating your head like a percussion instrument
I'd rip you like paper, but like Origami - sonz I'll leave you distraut and bent.

You a pimp? ha! Jon your girl blow's like candles on a B-day.
so when I see her I'm make sure to whopper like burgers from BK.

lol... uppin.. 4 votes

Wow, weak here. Didn't like either one you this week


Jay-1st punch was wack wack. I don't know if you were thinkin about brandon/ but as far as i know Jonathon's sister/if he even has a sister has nothin to do with rb/rv. Terribly worded. terrible concept just weak

John-No where near as good as last week. 1st bar was ok at best. Nothing special, could have been alot better. more statementish than punchish. 2nd bar same...wording was ok, but overall punch was weak..

Jay-2nd bar plllaaayeeed as all fuck. I know you do better then this on rb. Every punch you drop here, seems like your not even tryin. in my opinion. I hated this 2nd bar, basically just lost you the match.


v/John

I was gonna leave RV...but easy wins like you bought me back.
because nothing in life is free......and your sister taught me that.
uh yea, this punch sucked man. too basic n' played

vs.

An only child, but shit... I'd leave you guessin, I'm bustin this foo
They say I'm sweet & mild, but I'll smash ya, and bring a concussion too
just a statement, where's the creativity?
I play with your brain, beating your head like a percussion instrument
I'd rip you like paper, but like Origami - sonz I'll leave you distraut and bent.
just a threat, no punch here at all

vs.

You a pimp? ha! Jon your girl blow's like candles on a B-day.
so when I see her I'm make sure to whopper like burgers from BK.
yea, this is played n' not that great anyway

Well, all 4 bars here were played, uncreative, and weak. Jonathon didn't even have punches tho and just had statements so for that I'm giving this to Jay.

Vote - Jay

discribe a punch for me.

punches hit your opponent Jon.

Nothing

vs.

Nothing

v/Jay for mehish nothing

boooooo, terrible from both

Jay Wins 2-0
Jon Loses 1-1