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DaTrusHurtz 03-29-07 01:26 PM

7. Civilized Gangsta (1-1) vs. 8. Dao (1-0)
 
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March Madness Battles

You will be assigned a school that participated in March Madness. The goal of this battle is to diss your opponent's school with basketball related punches. However, you may also throw non-basketball related punches at your opponent's school if you choose to. Good Luck.

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Civilized Gangsta - UCLA Bruins

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Dao - Stanford Cardinal


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
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Civil. 03-30-07 09:59 AM

check. 14. I need An Extension till tuesday?

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3155078

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240909

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3155456

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3155455
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Dao 03-30-07 11:46 AM

done deal .

Dao 04-03-07 05:10 PM

I checked your online store.. no one wears those bummy clothes
I see you have a FAQ.. now you just need to get some of those
Your schools full of pussies, everytime you step to us you fail
Your school puts more emphasis on woman sports than males
but whatever, I see you rep your colors with pride
Ucla's #1 in NCAA team championships..
............................that's what they said in 1999
But now your nothin, haven't done shit since but lose
We get more competition from high school teams than from you
it's pathetic.. fuck ulca.. fuck the yellow.. fuck the blue
agaisnt us not only do you come up short..
...................but ya'll roll up in those^ kind of buses too

Civil. 04-03-07 05:55 PM

I'd take this shit into depp(th)........but who believes in pirates
Tha fuck cares bout the cardinals, they can't even beat the irish
I guess its ya luck to lose every game except for one
And the chance of the fans to stand for(d) you, is next to none
Expect some fun? no one on the team can afford to be a hero
How we goin to look up to the game.... Losin 42 to 0
The scoreboard don't show improvement, losins a harsh habbit
Only thing you did good all of last year, was march madness
Seriously ya team sucks, every single one of ya guys n
You aignt even on the top of your own page, they just got verizon

Ventice 04-03-07 09:27 PM

CG get my vote

Dao came with the creativity and scheme, I like the fact you brung history in this.

CG came with some tight shyt, the closer got my vote though.

Civil. 04-04-07 05:49 PM

damn at nobody else votin.

Prycele$$ 04-04-07 09:03 PM

agaisnt us not only do you come up short..
...................but ya'll roll up in those^ kind of buses too

vs.

Seriously ya team sucks, every single one of ya guys n
You aignt even on the top of your own page, they just got verizon


Hmm..
it came down to the closers...

imma give this one to CG..
his shit was more witty and not as plain.. ya dig?

Popcorn. 04-04-07 09:09 PM

Ucla's #1 in NCAA team championships..
............................that's what they said in 1999
But now your nothin, haven't done shit since but lose
We get more competition from high school teams than from you
it's pathetic.. fuck ulca.. fuck the yellow.. fuck the blue
agaisnt us not only do you come up short..
...................but ya'll roll up in those^ kind of buses too

[vs]

I'd take this shit into depp(th)........but who believes in pirates
Tha fuck cares bout the cardinals, they can't even beat the irish
How we goin to look up to the game.... Losin 42 to 0
The scoreboard don't show improvement, losins a harsh habbit
Only thing you did good all of last year, was march madness
Seriously ya team sucks, every single one of ya guys n
You aignt even on the top of your own page, they just got verizon



Close battle. Came down pretty much to the closer like everyone else said.




VOTE = Civilized Gangsta

Out Writechas 04-04-07 09:23 PM

ima be honest

it was nothin vs nothin

both verses need to be more creative, better worded and have harder punches..and on that note, Civil takes this..based on bein the less weaker of the two..i honestly read both verses like 3 times tryna find something i liked but i didn't wanna force myself to quote something, but both of ya need to elevate

v/cg

Heychoo 04-04-07 09:33 PM

nothing really.. really bland wording, diss the school, not just school cliche punches.. make shit more wittier.. the closer was decent although it wasnt really related to the school.. but yeah, vote CG..

Tebo 04-05-07 12:10 AM

Nothing stood out to me, but Civilized had a better effort & tried to make more personal punches to his team. I'm not sayin either had any good punches just nothin really quoteable for topic. I had trouble with this topic also & didn't get anythin quoteable. So I know how it is.

V// Civilized, nice job

DaTrusHurtz 04-05-07 10:39 AM

Nothing

vs.

Nothing

I didn't really find anything I'd say was quotable in this match. However, clear winner tho. Dao, come up short line was alright but its played. Thing that hurt u the most was u had a few lines which came off as fake. Like the women's sports thing, thats not true at all, lol. Then the 1999 line, that was almost a compliment. I'd say away from dissin' UCLA's titles in a battle like this. Just felt nothing u had really hit. Civilized, nothing quotable, but u were consistent. U had some personals on Stanford, even tho I'm not sure if they were really the best one. And then u had the line where u complimented him by saying his good thing is march madness. This is a march madness battle!!! lol. Either way tho, I think u got this.

Vote - Civilized Gangsta

DaTrusHurtz 04-05-07 10:40 AM

CG wins 6-0 plus Dao doesn't vote

Civilized Gangsta WINS 2-1
Dao LOSES 1-1


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