Soulfire vs. Monsterous
 

Checkin' in... U spit first

Theres no point to this battle your chances of victory are minuscule
A few in the frontline are presentable, but the rest are pitiful
your structure is poor so a duel with me is of no good, this fact is critical
now risk gettin beat n battered? the monster is known to chew kids--soul's trash
so i see the mistake like fat chicks in beauty pagents, YOUR NOT FIT TO DO THIS
battlin mc's like soul'll definatly keep me on a smash rate, handlin no mass wight-- cuss
pricks're only hot for a sec, being why soul losin his flames quik like cigars in ash trayz
he's an actor, probely the1 to appear hard 'n have speech of taking lives
but on the inside, he'z softer then the dudes castin on queer eye for the straight guy
what a spineless guy , soul is now living a pitiful life
based on the strugle to beat me.. which is the pitiful side
because the thought of me losing to soul is a.. mythical.. lie

oh my fault you said 10 bars?
ighht thenn fuck the last 3 barz i had down

It's aight, u could keep it. I don't really care... I went over by two lines anyway

GODDAMN, this niggas verse is Monsterously shitty//
Soulfire's here to burn, let's get down to the nitty gritty//
This dumbass got no vocabulary, used pitiful like 4 times//
Ur verse is so bad it's freakin' scary, please, no more rhymes//
Nigga's talkin' bout my structure, I can hardly read his crap//
Sorry muthafucka, you just "rhymed" yourself into a trap//
This nigga's flow is like an avalanche, come tumblin' down//
Against me you never had a chance, I'ma knock ya on ur crown//
This nigga's whole entire verse is a fuckin metaphor//
Stands for, newbies like me are bringin' crap out every pore//
This monster ain't known for shit but ridin' on a real MC'S dick//
I'm tired of this, gotta slit ur throat cause bitch ur makin' me sick//

uppin for votes




p.s audio battle ne one? this text mess is kinna deadd

uppin for VOTES

Uppin #1... Let's get some honest votes here, peeps!
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soufire takez it eazily
weak battle
punchges: s......hit harder.....monster waz wak
flow: soulfire...eazier 2 read n follow
strucute: s....wek on ya shyt monster
vote: soulfire.....
weeakkk battle....but ok.....
hit dis battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699

Monsterous ya structure was all messed, but ya had sum punches and the flow wasn't too bad i seen worse. Soul ya had a good structure sum simple disses but over more consistent with the punches. so my vote-soulfire

peep my battle out!!

Soul had a pretty nice verse, nice personals, punches, and metas. Monsterous came with played lines and wasn't allt hat original. He did have an occasional good punch, but not nearly as many as soul.
Please drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109881

Thanks for the votes and the feedback, peeps. Keep em comin'. Oh, and when we battle, check out my battle with Yo What Up. Should be on my vsig today or tommorow. Uppin #2

Uh, that's sig, as in signature. Sorry.
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Soulfire, vote going out you brotha', i didnt like youre use GD but that just me , both weak SF you had better punches. Mon~..dude...no comment..keep working man.

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