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Dufflebag Boy 08-09-09 08:29 AM

short lil pointless rhyme :/
 
another collection to add to the textual releases
but i got a question to ask does anybody read these
guess this be best in the trash since nobody sees these
but im so good at these raps its like im a whole nother species
yo i spit it ta show you how i perform my swagger
so i just go and spit it now and rehearse it later
getting more poor as days go on turn in CANS for money?
no you fuckin moron i do everything i CAN for money
to rap im the new champ that'll send u all to bootcamps
and im one of the few to truly be living off of foodstamps


fuck it just felt like rhyming some shit wasnt really going anywhere with it just thought id make a random attempt at writing (something i havent done in a while

MurDaH187 08-24-09 12:44 PM

flow was good, multis was there , concept wasnr original, struture seems good, topic was boring and yes people read these and long as honest votes an feed back needs me i will be there to help "give a hand" like a halloween prank

Ysdat 08-28-09 05:42 PM

links ?


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