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Dickard. 11-27-05 08:31 PM

Mentalz & .Lola "Kitten" Cruez. II vs. Spektikul & Ysdat
 


Battles up: Monday
Check In: Wednesday
Drop time: Friday

Both members must check in.
Only 1 member must drop the verse.

Rules

Topic: What I Found With My Soul
16-32 Lines per member

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Dervla 11-27-05 08:32 PM

TouchDown!.....check

Mentalz 11-27-05 09:32 PM

Checkin' in....

Ysdat 11-27-05 10:30 PM

I love thses topic were people put two random words together :bored:

check.

Spektikul 11-28-05 02:45 PM

Word, sense im dope ill just half ass it :cool:

check..

Spektikul 12-01-05 03:56 PM

Spek n Ysdat's Finished Topical...
 
What I Found With My Soul

- Moment of Seperation -

Alone in my created hell hole, I am speechless in need of expression
Misplaced lessons brought me right to a point of lifes discretion
Warped mind runs rampant,creating thoughts of the past few days
Back arching shiver's crunch my stiff spine,I witness black sun rays
Snapping into a moment of life, its mearly my bloodless virgin birth
I feel unsure who I am, grasiously try to stub this serpant curse
Undoubtly have many followers,but im mearly a follower myself
Feeling sick inside like my souls forming a hollow in my health
Gazing into blackness surrounding, my eyes malfunction insain
My hands bleed the blood of life,while my heart beat's life pain
I feel pinned in a position like a murder'd picture on hells wall
Minds hearing wicked static like the devils out of range cell calls
Eye movements rapidly fast, but it seems im here to die so slow
They say faith has its up and downs, How deep can I fucking go?
As I hear tyrants yelling my name holding there flame torches high
Desperatly try to reach to my soul,to find my position and explain why
Blindly feel a sudden emptyness inside like erdoded corpse in casket
Glaring eyes stare as I pass out , visions of a child, floating in a river basket

- State of Seperation -

Looking down at unconscious states, I watch my body disintegrate
Gathering memories of miracles, and disregard every sin I'd make
Bloodied, bruised, drama convinced me I was in the showman's shoes
Incapable of ascending higher, still weary from Romans and Jews
Left suspended in such a way, I notice a fight for every breath
More confused than my own mind, am I living, or is this death?
Sunrays form salted sweat on my brow, as I begin a violent cry
Frustrated and helpless, no matter how loud still silent, why?
The far horizon holds a church, just above it stands a steeple
Realizing in this moment, Ill sacrifice this body for my people
I fly beside my carcass, an dissolve inside from a touched cheek
Finally, my eyes were open, releasing just enough energy to speak:

"O Father, lover of my soul,
Let me to thy bosom fly,
While the nearer waters roll,
While the tempest still is high!

Hide me, O my Saviour, hide,
Till the storm of life is past,
Safe into the haven guide,
O receive my soul at last!"

These final words I spoke, provoked cracked whips and heavy stones
Yet again I leave my body, which now is only blood and broken bones
Townsfolk truly feel they've won, for me this is nothing like a loss
Evaporating into the sky, witnessing my body still nailed to the cross.

"...and his name still lives on."

Mentalz 12-01-05 10:39 PM

Fuckin' right.. Good shit you two.

Spektikul 12-01-05 11:28 PM

*Notices in rules that we must tell who did what*

Ysdat - first half
Spek - second half.

Sorry Sick... :)

Mentalz 12-02-05 12:07 AM

Still 'sick' though. ;)

Sick. 12-02-05 10:13 AM

ok spek ill let that slide.. if you make it to the next round please label your verses :)

Spektikul 12-02-05 11:12 AM

^ Jeeeeaaaa.... :thumbup:

Mentalz 12-02-05 03:41 PM

Shut up cunt lips we're droppin' last minute. :p

Mentalz 12-03-05 12:19 AM

Mentalz
Lola


What if I told you secretly, that for five years of straight fued
...Two tactical minds would collide in holy hate & revenue...
"It's only fate!" proclaimed the pope Urban the Second
The Holy War at its most virulent point in attempts to be effective
Correct it, The Holy Land was a fiercely contested battlefield neglected
Shielded soldiers weilded religion as reason's to slaughter
Fought over by Muslim and Christian armies, zealots and assassins.
Ever active in attackin' in the name of god's will & passion.
...Savage 'morbid' lynguistics, from putrid infidels to simplistics...
But get this: two renowned figures errupted from the 'sickness'
...Richard the Lionheart, then King of England, versus Content...
The European cursed Sultan Saladin. Savior of Alah's profits.
Contenued conflict, as Creators names portrayed an' held High
As the Warriors of God collide an' explode in the night's sky
It's lifes cry... An excuse to conquer the proper and slaughter
As Son's and Daughters prosper from the gift the Angel of Death offer's.


.:Richard the Lionheart:.

I was born on September 8, 1157, & was enthroned in 1172.
King to few, for kingdoms are run from poverty to including fueds.
I spent a few, years... in twining my mind in proper sanction
Until I felt the urge to splurge and collide with the Muslim Nation
Subtle & Patient. I tried to fight for whats right, coincide with my God
But alas. I guess my God's a fraud because we lost it to Alah's stance.
I crawled intranced, with my lance on point and justly in order
Up until Saladin strode his army up to the Husky Holy Border
Now I'm Older. I think back to the Third Crusade's parade of Shambles.
I understand the gambles placed by the Christian race in despising haste
It's "describing fate". Yah, suprising state we were in b/c of the Irate.
I taste my soul, & watch it falter and alter at the altar & in roll...
For when I died April 6, 1199, from a wound in the Limousin.
I realized the forsaken choice in the poise of the pope's engrossed poison.


.:Saladin:.

I was born in 1137 a scholar, and died, March 4, 1193 a Muslim Hero.
It was never my intentions to be resurrected from zero's standing.
To commanding demanding folks to Jerusalem's unspoken ranting
Panting, as I counter the thunder from the 'powder' cowards
...Louder, as the vibrant encounters eclipse religions poison shower...
Poised to cower, during the First Crusades grasp of the city...
...Doomed to loom in utter control as we stroll in self pity...
It's shitty... but in the end my men fought & won the city's hold
We were bold enough to hold the corrupted assassins death toll
Wept for the soul, it's what I did in the end, & whitnessed canty
Scripted sanity & so the Muslim Nation still holds it in strict tenacity.




If anyone is confused, this is about the role Saladin and Richard the Lionheart played in the Third Crusade.

Willa 12-03-05 12:28 AM

omg i was going to leave feed until i saw that yellow shit lol fuck all that

Mentalz 12-03-05 12:30 AM

ill change the color you blind bitch.


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