Ill-Grammatix vs Maku JaiiLiin
 

Battle Rules:

UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Drop 24 hrs after check-in ( ya got 3 days, homie!)

I'm in Iraq so I'm about 1/2 day ahead of some of y'all depending on where you at... so keep that in perspective.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 07:31 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 07:31 PM.

Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-04 08:40 PM.

My lyrical text'll "Mak-U" feel like you in "JaiiLiin" shit/
I'm nailin' to this board while you training to fail and quit/
you frail and sick; i'm surprised you still alive with all those "flatlines"/ Even when unresuscitated ya heart beats more than all ya wack rhymes/ my diction'll have you wishing and itching for intermission/ or intervention preventing the drama that I be spittin'/ you couldn't drop a hot verse if a burst o'flames went thru ya pre-writes/ and ya homies helped you out to meet ya posting time of three nights/ so how's it feel to be a loser? I'll let the judges tell the tale/ cuz they ain't feeling you like blind kids with no hands attempting braille

one... good luck homie! It's kinda short but how personal can ya get with someone you don't know nothing about without being fake?

Have ya throat slit in the night//
But force you to do it, exposin ya own flesh,
Like every other bitch on this site//
Expelled’s ya level of rhyme, when this hellion is amped//
When I reach for the nina, I dispel rebellion in camps*//
"Try eatin this emcee, it’ll stretch ya jaws-
Diminish ya breath, the minute I address ya flaws-
saw ya click, let em know I ain’t impressed at all
I’m not micheal, I got better things to do than to mess with y'all!"**
The reason for your illness, man? I’m purely the source//
I’ll still piss on ya dead body, make you a urinal corpse//
I’ll always be better than you, at rap joustin//
So there’s no point in you getting better~like the renovation of crack houses//
So bring ya click, if you say they the greatest//
I’ll still rip ya ass, like I grinded cheese grater to anus//

been busy, went to a family reunion, things of that nature, here it is though.

*he was or is reppin, rebel camp in his sig

**I love 2 eat an emcee who likes to flex da jaws-
I'll put his lyrics to da test as I address his flaws-
and let'm know I ain't impressed at all-
Ya flow's wack, I got better things to do than to mess with y'all!"

that is in his sig

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

tHE MULTIES DID IT CUZ.. WHEN I READ MAKU'S VERSE, i WAS BIASED ALREADY, BUT YOU CAME TIGHT ILL.. THE MULTIES HIT HARD, THE PUNCHES WERE A LIL BETTER TOO,.. I GIVE THIS TO YOU BECAUSE THE MULTIES, LIKE "INTERMISSION", "INTERVENTION" THAT SOUNDED NICE.. AND THE PUNCHES WERE SOLID.. BOTH OF YA'LL HAD OKAY STUCTURE BUT THIS GOES TO ILL TOO.. SO MY FINAL VOTE GOES TO ILL..

PLEASE RETURN FAVOR WITH AN HONEST VOTE IN MIN.. THANX,,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138974

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

first off... that was the LAMEST personal ive ever seen maku... no hate and no disrespect, you good, but WTF? usin his rhyme from his sig without changing the rhymes, only the content?? that was pretty weak... im not feelin ya structure.. .. i dont see why you need to bold all ya rhymes.. id understand if they were madd punches or wordplay, but i dont see the need to do it all the time.. thats not what lost ya this though, its probly just ya style... what lost this for ya is lack of GOOD punches.. multis, when pulled off in the right way completely dopify and are the best thing ever when a punch is done in multi n they work... cos multis are tha bomb... but your multis detracted from hits... you were too busy tryna make it rhyme n flow well, which it did, but not thinkin of punches....

Ill: decent/good verse... some nice metas n wordplay.. good opener. decent closer. better multis than maku, cos you were punchin as well...

v/Ill grammatix

maku: just cos i didnt vote for you it doesnt mean ya not good, aight? develop ya style n ya vocab, develop your mind... ill just had it over you on this one... you had the right idea usin multis... multis r cool.........................

aiight...that's what i'm talking about... ^ for votes people... honest votes only

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

yo MJ you had gd potntials but ur verse didnt rhyme on like 4lines rhymed...but IG had a gd verse that flowed well...he had tight word plays and his punches connected...his structure was better also...MJ u gatta fix up ur structure..IG u can come much more better yo...but all the same ur verse was tight...gd gd...

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

Ayo maku, I just wasnt feelin your rhym at all (punch wise). Both were pretty on point in terms of flow. But the other guy had better wordplay to support giving a nice final punch.
vote- I.G

Ayo pleeeeeeeeeease return the favor and check my battle against DV8.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167

Ayo this voted system is alittle jacked, i'll get at strobe for you to get the vote switched cuz I ment to vote for I.G. Sorry about that.


Fixed

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

Flow: Ill-Grammatix
Structure: Ill-Grammatix
Punches: Ill-Grammatix
Personals: Maku JaiiLiin
Creativity: Maku JaiiLiin
Metas: TIe
Multiez: Ill-Grammatix
Enjoyment: Ill-Grammatix

VOTE: Ill_Grammatix

consider this a clean sweep... one cat voted for you by accident, i guess... peep the thread^^^. Good battle though, Maku. You've been my best challenge so far. Oh... and I peeped one of ya audios.... ya flow sounds a lot tighter on audio... maybe kats'll catch on to ya flow better if they heard it.

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return the fav and vote in my battle wit phatinum...

Ya go check my battle against DV8 As well homie. one.