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(Stanza) 06-09-05 10:03 PM

(Stanza) vs BIG Spook
 
Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-10-05 at 10:03 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 06-09-05 10:35 PM

BIG Spook has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 10:35 PM.

BIG Spook 06-09-05 11:09 PM

check it...

I explode on Stanza like Dauntes Peak
people must mistake you for B-Rad cuz your lines are weak
I keep it 'cumin' like a fine bitch givin me head
da only pussy this guy ever got was when he was breast-fed
im killin this bitch cuz my verses are unstoppable
stop tryin man these punches are untopical
man... why your name got parentheses?
just wondering cuz your name doesnt belong inside of these -->( )<--
damn dawg go find yaself a new thang...cuz obviously
your name wasnt meant for this game

1)Dauntes Peak: Volcano that exploded(obviously)
2)B-Rad: Ever seen the movie "Malibu's Most Wanted"

GOOD LUCK

System 06-10-05 10:27 AM

(Stanza) has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 10:27 AM.

(Stanza) 06-10-05 10:39 AM

Yo

Big Spook, You Not Gonna Win Mayne Lets Face The Truth
Bcuz The Lie Is In The Mirror whenever You Look Through
You Hurt? I Bet You Wish You Never Accepted this battle Now
Yo verse will Get No Attention Like New Kids from Out of Town
I Mean Really Dude Lets Stay Down To Earth B4 You Get Hurt
Bcuz Youll Never be Above me Like The collar Around my Shirt
The Voters Laugh at Your Shit Like Your Ass Was Makin Faces
Bitchez In the Government Even Make Better bars at Court Cases
I Think Ive said Enought To take This battle So You Can Just Chill
Bcuz You Already Lost, Like Amnesia Patients Without Their Pill


~Stanza~

(Stanza) 06-12-05 05:37 PM

Uppin Up In This Mofo.............................................

BIG Spook 06-13-05 10:32 PM

uppin............................................. ...................
lets get some votes on dis shit

Stanza 06-13-05 10:35 PM

This was feedback posted for (Stanza)
 
I dont even use My This name anymore it was temporary That why i Dropped so wack and if i win Then Thatt be Crazy

Restricted 06-13-05 11:05 PM

Voted For: (Stanza)



Stanza:

Big Spook, You Not Gonna Win Mayne Lets Face The Truth
Bcuz The Lie Is In The Mirror whenever You Look Through
Decent..5/10
You Hurt? I Bet You Wish You Never Accepted this battle Now
Yo verse will Get No Attention Like New Kids from Out of Town
Not Feeling This..3/10
I Mean Really Dude Lets Stay Down To Earth B4 You Get Hurt
Bcuz Youll Never be Above me Like The collar Around my Shirt
Ok..4/10
The Voters Laugh at Your Shit Like Your Ass Was Makin Faces
Bitchez In the Government Even Make Better bars at Court Cases
Blah..4/10
I Think Ive said Enought To take This battle So You Can Just Chill
Bcuz You Already Lost, Like Amnesia Patients Without Their Pill
Decent..5/10

Overall: 21/50

BIG Spook:

I explode on Stanza like Dauntes Peak
people must mistake you for B-Rad cuz your lines are weak
WaCk..3/10
I keep it 'cumin' like a fine bitch givin me head
da only pussy this guy ever got was when he was breast-fed
Wack As Fuck..2/10
im killin this bitch cuz my verses are unstoppable
stop tryin man these punches are untopical
Ugh.Not Even A Punch..2/10
man... why your name got parentheses?
just wondering cuz your name doesnt belong inside of these -->( )<--
Wack..3/10
damn dawg go find yaself a new thang...cuz obviously
your name wasnt meant for this game
:-/...2/10

Overall: 12/50...Work On Creativity and Punches Man...

~R~

Denied Truth 06-13-05 11:33 PM

Voted For: (Stanza)

Flow - Stanza cuz big spook's was basic, sometimes lacking...plus the lass bar did not flow at all...Stanza's remained consistent
Punches - Stanza...Big Spook Had No Effective Punches, No Self Glorification Spook...Stanza had some tossed in that were decent..nothing special needed
Personals - Stanza becuz spook had none and stanza had the B.I.G personal...
Multies - Neither Becuz Both need Elevation and Use...No One Used Mulites..
Vocab - Again neither guys becuz you all didn't use any higher vocab...please elevate with this...makes it overall better
Originality - Spook had somem played lines...the cumin like fine bitch...the pussy and breast fed line didn't make sense and it is a played conept...
Stanza took all categories...
V/Stanza

Control Freq 06-21-05 03:03 AM

Voted For: (Stanza)

Watermelon........................................ ......

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Stanza 06-29-05 12:07 AM

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KizMiAzz 07-06-05 07:46 AM

This was feedback posted for (Stanza)
 
Ayo...simon says....get the fuck up!

Nice drop Stanza, you got this, son.

bdotones 07-06-05 10:46 AM

Voted For: (Stanza)


Bcuz The Lie Is In The Mirror whenever You Look Through


I Mean Really Dude Lets Stay Down To Earth B4 You Get Hurt
Bcuz Youll Never be Above me Like The collar Around my Shirt

Bitchez In the Government Even Make Better bars at Court Cases

Bcuz You Already Lost, Like Amnesia Patients Without Their Pill

kinda weak bar^, but you still got this

Confucius 07-07-05 02:34 PM

Voted For: (Stanza)

stanza got this one. his puches were better than bigs were. both of your structures were okay. the personals from stanza were better than bigs also. both of u had a solid flow but stanza won.

a can yall drop honest votes at on of the battles in my sig please.


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