(Stanza) vs BIG Spook
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10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-10-05 at 10:03 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
BIG Spook has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 10:35 PM.
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I explode on Stanza like Dauntes Peak people must mistake you for B-Rad cuz your lines are weak I keep it 'cumin' like a fine bitch givin me head da only pussy this guy ever got was when he was breast-fed im killin this bitch cuz my verses are unstoppable stop tryin man these punches are untopical man... why your name got parentheses? just wondering cuz your name doesnt belong inside of these -->( )<-- damn dawg go find yaself a new thang...cuz obviously your name wasnt meant for this game 1)Dauntes Peak: Volcano that exploded(obviously) 2)B-Rad: Ever seen the movie "Malibu's Most Wanted" GOOD LUCK |
(Stanza) has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 10:27 AM.
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Yo
Big Spook, You Not Gonna Win Mayne Lets Face The Truth Bcuz The Lie Is In The Mirror whenever You Look Through You Hurt? I Bet You Wish You Never Accepted this battle Now Yo verse will Get No Attention Like New Kids from Out of Town I Mean Really Dude Lets Stay Down To Earth B4 You Get Hurt Bcuz Youll Never be Above me Like The collar Around my Shirt The Voters Laugh at Your Shit Like Your Ass Was Makin Faces Bitchez In the Government Even Make Better bars at Court Cases I Think Ive said Enought To take This battle So You Can Just Chill Bcuz You Already Lost, Like Amnesia Patients Without Their Pill ~Stanza~ |
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lets get some votes on dis shit |
This was feedback posted for (Stanza)
I dont even use My This name anymore it was temporary That why i Dropped so wack and if i win Then Thatt be Crazy
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Voted For: (Stanza)
Stanza: Big Spook, You Not Gonna Win Mayne Lets Face The Truth Bcuz The Lie Is In The Mirror whenever You Look Through Decent..5/10 You Hurt? I Bet You Wish You Never Accepted this battle Now Yo verse will Get No Attention Like New Kids from Out of Town Not Feeling This..3/10 I Mean Really Dude Lets Stay Down To Earth B4 You Get Hurt Bcuz Youll Never be Above me Like The collar Around my Shirt Ok..4/10 The Voters Laugh at Your Shit Like Your Ass Was Makin Faces Bitchez In the Government Even Make Better bars at Court Cases Blah..4/10 I Think Ive said Enought To take This battle So You Can Just Chill Bcuz You Already Lost, Like Amnesia Patients Without Their Pill Decent..5/10 Overall: 21/50 BIG Spook: I explode on Stanza like Dauntes Peak people must mistake you for B-Rad cuz your lines are weak WaCk..3/10 I keep it 'cumin' like a fine bitch givin me head da only pussy this guy ever got was when he was breast-fed Wack As Fuck..2/10 im killin this bitch cuz my verses are unstoppable stop tryin man these punches are untopical Ugh.Not Even A Punch..2/10 man... why your name got parentheses? just wondering cuz your name doesnt belong inside of these -->( )<-- Wack..3/10 damn dawg go find yaself a new thang...cuz obviously your name wasnt meant for this game :-/...2/10 Overall: 12/50...Work On Creativity and Punches Man... ~R~ |
Voted For: (Stanza)
Flow - Stanza cuz big spook's was basic, sometimes lacking...plus the lass bar did not flow at all...Stanza's remained consistent Punches - Stanza...Big Spook Had No Effective Punches, No Self Glorification Spook...Stanza had some tossed in that were decent..nothing special needed Personals - Stanza becuz spook had none and stanza had the B.I.G personal... Multies - Neither Becuz Both need Elevation and Use...No One Used Mulites.. Vocab - Again neither guys becuz you all didn't use any higher vocab...please elevate with this...makes it overall better Originality - Spook had somem played lines...the cumin like fine bitch...the pussy and breast fed line didn't make sense and it is a played conept... Stanza took all categories... V/Stanza |
Voted For: (Stanza)
Watermelon........................................ ...... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for (Stanza)
Ayo...simon says....get the fuck up!
Nice drop Stanza, you got this, son. |
Voted For: (Stanza)
Bcuz The Lie Is In The Mirror whenever You Look Through I Mean Really Dude Lets Stay Down To Earth B4 You Get Hurt Bcuz Youll Never be Above me Like The collar Around my Shirt Bitchez In the Government Even Make Better bars at Court Cases Bcuz You Already Lost, Like Amnesia Patients Without Their Pill kinda weak bar^, but you still got this |
Voted For: (Stanza)
stanza got this one. his puches were better than bigs were. both of your structures were okay. the personals from stanza were better than bigs also. both of u had a solid flow but stanza won. a can yall drop honest votes at on of the battles in my sig please. |
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