*The~Star* vs ~Genicide~ (Voting Closed!)
 

Guess I'll start off with a check-in.

Battlin the one that peeps think should be the rookie of the month.This should be interesting.

Battles voted on:

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1405521
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1406794
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134547
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134544
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134546

aight checkin in... punchlines arent my thing but here goes..

:~:Here We Go:~:
 

***For the peeps that don’t know what “nick” means,it means cut or scratch***
***If you don’t get the punches (you should understand), just pm me***

this stars fallen... u neva could earn the title of greatness..
could give her a blueprint of a win.. and she still couldnt make it..

explanations.
her title is greatness..
blueprint shows u how to make things..

alright lets get some votes now...

nice battle..

|~|Rookie of the Month? What a ‘joke’, below ‘typical’, record consist of peeps on his ‘dick’|~|
|~|Now with losing streak, loss breath to ‘choke’, leaving him ‘lyrical’ ‘nick’|~|
^ok bar..good personal on rookie of the month, not feelin the punch or wordplay that much

this stars fallen... u neva could earn the title of greatness..
could give her a blueprint of a win.. and she still couldnt make it..
^good personal on the greatness title and on her crew, good wordplay and nice solid punch

v/gen better overall punch and better wordplay

the star:

|~|Rookie of the Month? What a ‘joke’, below ‘typical’, record consist of peeps on his ‘dick’|~|
|~|Now with losing streak, loss breath to ‘choke’, leaving him ‘lyrical’ ‘nick’|~|

^^first of all all this shit ( l ~ l and ' ' " ") is really unnecessary it doesnt make your verse look hotter...your punch was decent you didnt really use a personal tho and it was pretty basic definately could have been better

overall : 4/10

genicide:

this stars fallen... u neva could earn the title of greatness..
could give her a blueprint of a win.. and she still couldnt make it..

^^first off there were 2 good personals in your first line and dont see that much very good shyt...2nd line also hott i was feeling this probably best punch i have seen so far in the tourney

overall : 9/10

vote: genicide

~!1!~

yo thanks for the positive feedback flow..

GEN:this stars fallen... u neva could earn the title of greatness..
could give her a blueprint of a win.. and she still couldnt make it..
^nice personal... i was hoping you werent gonna say something about sonning her, and im glad you didnt.. good job on that punch.. blueprint line was pretty dope..



the star:
|~|Rookie of the Month? What a ‘joke’, below ‘typical’, record consist of peeps on his ‘dick’|~|
|~|Now with losing streak, loss breath to ‘choke’, leaving him ‘lyrical’ ‘nick’|~|
^i felt this was just a tad bit stretched.. had some ok personals in there.. ok vocab.. but it wasent really hard hitting..looking forward to seeing you come a lil harder...



star babe, we in the same crew, but i gotta go with Genicide on this one.. he had a pretty hard punch.. big up to both for throwin out a punch early and not taking all week loll..

Vote: Genicide

*The~Star*: aight well that wasn't a very good punch from you
no hate of course.......your flow was there but your punch wasn't
hitting very hard plus.....it wasn't a very original punch in my opinion
and I ain't see any personals to me at least

~Genicide~: well that was a pretty good punch you had good flow/
syllable count and it was lined up well.......................................
punch was sorta original so ya get points for that of course!
and your punch had personals I believe and that gives ya more
points and punch was pretty hard....

vote:~Genicide~

The Star - well like i predicted u cam stretched...work on that!....word ur line better so they arent stretched....not ned for 'this'-crap-....its gay....punch didnt hit hard....very basic....give it a 3.7/10....

Genicide - Nice meta....flow was way better then her's...u hit alot harder....personal was decent in the set up...keep workin and ull elevate more....give it a 7.9/10.....

Vote - Genicide

5-0 Genicide....8-0 will be declared a KO....uping for these guys....dont forget to vote on other battles!!

Good battle....Breakdown...

Star......your setup was nice good wordplay in it, I figured you would follow it with a nice punch but you didn't that punch really killed it, you were so close to having something hot. Your punch was played and really weak an it cost you the battle.


Gen......good drop I liked the setup an the wordplay in the punch made a played concept a pretty good punch, it was a decent drop but you gonna have to drop harder next round cuz that won't cut it, but it was nice use of wordplay an a decent punch that got you to next round

Vote: Gen

Star-Average and pretty orginal but overall not much but decent
and had a flow and structure was decent but mainly you didnt
hit very hard

Gen-You didnt come to hard but your punch was harder
and had better wordplay and overall better Punchline :p

v/Gen

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