Freestyle Quickee(feat.CENTZ)
 

Battling LOGIK-its easier battling death-
with doctors beating your chest-
carbon monoxide tanks forcing your breath-
after you got left-
with 6 point blank hallows-
penetrating your clavical-
kill your image like I strangled your shadow-
leave you heart beat compadible with lateral-
im untagible- twisting bars till they tangle-
and each word I spit- look like words in script-
or even like after effects of a bad acid trip-
from the way I rip-
is like Edward scissors hands fingered your girls clit-
these cats is college hopefuls the way they testing-
Me when they couldn’t drop shit with severe indegestion-
Lyrically Im precise when it comes ruining aspirations-
And autograph my intials in surgical lasserations-
A rapper like me is as often as haileys comet-
Fucking spitting that’s for blowjobs I vomit-

MAKENG KNOW CENTZ
Fuck heat im walking napalm at 1000000 degrees-
With 8 nitrus tanks in my body so I hit mach speeds-
That means- i burn m.c.’s- like asteroids breaking earths gravitational pull-Im surprised you aint grown horns your so full of bull- its my time to shine-
phenomonal astronomical lines-
You cats is like the word orange there is no logical way you rhyme-
A bunch of fagets think you ill just cause your sick-
You aint an m.c. just another word taken out of context-
Said you want it with CENTZ then saw I was deranged-
And bitched out NAH dawg all I said was I want change-

this shit was tight had nice flow and punches. i dont know why nobody has replied........

Verses were nice, flow wasn't that good from First cat, but I could relate, Centz had the better flow of both...and the line that I liked from each was Logic="kill your image like I strangled your shadow-"

and from Centz=Said you want it with CENTZ then saw I was deranged-
And bitched out NAH dawg all I said was I want change

Your shit was good overall.

and each word I spit- look like words in script-
or even like after effects of a bad acid trip-
from the way I rip-
is like Edward scissors hands fingered your girls clit-


Said you want it with CENTZ then saw I was deranged-
And bitched out NAH dawg all I said was I want change


Those were my favorite parts tight flow looking forward to reading more of ur shit .... Keep it up ... Peace and Love 43i

THANKS YOU I HAVE 2 MORE HERE BOTH WITH M.K.C AS WELL AS ONE THAT HAS THREE OF THE CREW M3MBERS ME M.K.C AND NO BRAINER

This was an aight drop, found it difficult on the first verse, as syllables werent rhymed properly and it made the rhyme scheme quite choppy, the second verse was more steady, I think more multies throughout and it woulda smoothened your flow... The concept was a bit overplayed and some of the lines were distant, you had some powerful lines and it coulda helped by delivering a well thought message... The wordplay was aight, punches were thrown and some imagery was used, which is good... This was a very solid drop, and ya mos def showed your potential in all areas, look forward to seeing more from you... Aint bad at all, keep writing and elevating...

Peez...