13th Disciple vs. M.O.C
 

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Topic: Divided in Time

in...

this gon be a fuckin good battle
check in

finally sumbody ain't no-showin

here it is...ain't no reason to EVER wait till the deadline...lol...just
playing....good luck

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/nicknamemusic.htm

aight here we go
prol'ly I dealt a bit strange with the topic
fuck that

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/m...combatmusic.htm
lyrics are on soundclick

aight may the best win
peace

MOC-
ok sounds forced like your trying to get in more lyrics. audio quality could be worked on like there is points where your too close to the mic. the mixing needs work. I also hear mic electrical sounds. some kind of interfearance. try to fix that is like nails on a chalk board to my ears. I would give this track 5 out of 10

13th disapline-
quality is pritty good could be masterd. and Id change the eq on your voice, Not sure If I like the way your vocals are eq'd. Flow was good. I would have like to seen pause some to change up the breaks. lyrics are decent but you dont have alot of emtion so its hard to pay attion to them. like I have to put forth effort to know what your saying thou 90% of people on here are like that just somthing to work on. I know i do its half the time. aight so i give this track 7.5 out of 10

Vote = 13th

13th- beat is nice... flow was nice... its ok, but the only thing i didnt like was ur voice, its ok.... 6.8/10

M.O.C.- not feelin this beat... flow was koo though... i aint feelin it that much... voice wasnt really good, n to me voice, is really important... 5.3/10

13th- tight beat, you rappin over it nice. you stayin on topic nice. sick last line.

M.O.C- well the beat is def. different, i'll leave it at that. i didnt really understand where you were going with ya lyrics fittin with the topic. i know you can be more creative.

vote: 13th

13 I like the beat... your delivery came through, but i think you need to work on pausing sometimes, to catch attention back... lyrics were good and on topic... delivery and beat kinda reminds me of some ol school Pros n Cons (Vancouver underground group).

i give it a 7 out of ten

Moc beat was tight in the beginning, came hard but i didnt like the change up in the middle. I like the last line. that came hard. doesnt sound like you mastered your lyrics very well though. You really need to use a limiter on that. or step away from the mic a lil.

I give it a 6 out of ten

13th:

Beat is fuckin dope. Intro o fu talkin is ok. Whoa, i'm feeling ur flow.. But, u need to up ur emotion, at points u sounded dead.. Delivery needs work, quality is nice.. Lyrics are nice, i'm feeling the topic.. Stayed on topic.. But, u lacked emotion..it was ok..

7.1/10

M.O.C:

Beat is ok.. Quality needs madd work, i could hear pops. You fell off beat sometimes, but came back.. Delivery is ok..Emotion is their... I think rappin about killin u rgirl, and girl problems isn't under the category, Divided into time..oh wait.... i heard the ending..ok..Ok, this was ok..

6.4/10

13TH gets this by a hair, wasn't not much difference.

*LISTENIN*

13TH DICSIPLE

IM FEELIN DA BEAT. HOT SHIT. FLOW IS SERIOUS AND DELIEVERY IS SICK. EMOTION AND MIC PRESENCE AINT FELT. LYRICS IS HOT. YA TOPIC IS KINDA CHALLENGIN AND U DID GOOD WITH IT. I LIKE THIS SON U GOT TALENT NO DOUBT. IM FEELIN IT.

BEAT-8
LYRICS-9
FLOW-10
DELIEVERY-10
MIC PRESENCE-3
QUALITY-6
TOPIC-8
EMOTION-5

OVERALL 59/100

M.O.C.

THE BEAT WAS ILL....IT WENT WITH THE WORDS EXCELLENTYL. TOPIC WAS KILLA. YA LYRICS WAS THERE. THE SWITCH UP IN EMOTION AND FEELINS WAS SICK MAN. AND IT WAS CREATIVE. YA QUALITY WAS ASSS. FLOW WAS RIDIDCULOUS. U DELIEVERED IT WELL..MIC PRESENCE WAS FEKT AND U HAD GOOD EMOTION. NICE TRACK MAN

BEAT-9
LYRICS-10
FLOW-10
DELIEVERY-10
MIC PRESENCE-8
QUALITY-3
TOPIC-9
EMOTION-10

69/100

M.O.C. TOOK THIS CUZ TO ME HE HAD THE BETTER VERSE. HIS SHIT STOOD OUT MORE AND IW AS FEELIN HIS SHIT NO DOUBT.

VOTE-M.O.C.

13th wins. good luck in week 2 dawgs.

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