graphex-vs-valor
 

10 line spit
no crew or d/r votes

sHiFtY fInGeRs = Sonek = Graphex = DQ'ed

checkin in...........ready to spit
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this here brings fear, got you lookin through your rear mirrior, hopin i wont be there/
or that im way back, but face facts i stay intact to make sure that fake rappas dont make hats/
or clothin lines so there wont be clones of lies of phony guys roamin by/
i could spit smooth or st-studder, either way i cut through you like bu-butter/
i could pull out a gat and pull back and shoot/
but instead ill beat you with my meat till your black and blue, then laugh at you/
i write superb shit, if you wrote a rap and i burned it you must of deserved it/
im high and yous lower then me so yous bird shit, yous shy so i whipped your ass in public on purpose/
on the microphone im like your own, but with a higher tone, my minds messed so mind your own, befor i come in with plyers to ply your bones/

Birthday:
December 18, 1986
Age:
17
Crew:
S.O.L.
Biography:
the best
Location:
Canada
Interests:
breakdancing
Occupation:
hip hop
Show Battle Records:
All

on december 18,1986 every since god created you this world has been hectic.....
because u grew up,and started rapping in the game and strait wrect-it....(sucked)
and don't think just cus ya interest is breakdancing,that ur dope for one second.....
cus im gonna murder u 9 times just like mass-murderer marcus wesson........
and dawg u suck so why in the hell u gonna display ya battle record.......
cus im gonna just be marked down as the one that merked u severly clever.....
oh no his bio-graphy is described to be the best......
he's gonna be rb's best looser,not to me but also to the rest......
so let this be a lesson for ya,dont ever battle a TERRORISTS......
because next time i'll dismantle you and make you see a therapist.........

not my best....but who needs ther best verse against this guy......
uppin number 1

haha this is a funny ass battle..........valor you just got merked

iight break down!

valor
bast line=on december 18,1986 every since god created you this world has been hectic.....
because u grew up,and started rapping in the game and strait wrect-it....
--lmao

worst line=and don't think just cus ya interest is breakdancing,that ur dope for one second.....
cus im gonna murder u 9 times just like mass-murderer marcus wesson........

Graphex
best line=i dont think this gay had one

worst line=or clothin lines so there wont be clones of lies of phony guys roamin by/
i could spit smooth or st-studder, either way i cut through you like bu-butter/

i think valor came way hader his lines acutully rhymed and he had a better flow and his punches hit way harder for the other dude i think u just need to elevat really bad so vote=valor

Vote: V

Why: Betta punches and personals. overall betta verse.

each bar had its own rhyme shceme so ya know, cause that guys sounded stupid sayin that those two bars didnt rhyme

uppin number dose ~2~
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Nice U Two I cant Pick Both Did Really Good Lol If I Really Had TO Pick Id Probly Go With graphex .. i think lol Byeee Mc DiP

i think overall graphex did a better job in his flow structure hits and multis were their alot so i think he took this one

ok explanation time yepee lol ok this battles i think was better then everyone is judging because ill tell you why

flow, both flowed really well i like the way both flowed tie their
structure also both had structure and was really good their too tie
multi's, now this is where graphex hit a bit more he hit with many multi's in each of his punch lines to make them more complex their for over all a better punch
punches like i said graphexs more complex makes them bettter
v=graphex

Vote disqualified for Cheating.

Graphex: Opening was Average. Your closing was decent. Hey man your flow, multis and vocab was good here. But you need punches to win battles and I didn't see any at all. You had the birdshit line that was aight. But except for that I didn't see any punchlines here, you got to come at your opponenet hard with punches to get votes here. Keep Spittin Fam.

Valor: Its like the same thing I said to Graphex. I didn't see any punches here really at all. Your flow and vocab was decent. Opening and Closing was average. You got to come with more punches against your opponent. I'm giving my vote to Graphex becasue I think he had the better flow overall. The Punchlines wasnt there in either verse so I cant go off of that. Im going by just flow here.

Vote: Graphex

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124472 (PLEASE CLICK ON THIS LINK AND TAKE TIME TO VOTE ON THIS BATTLE I WAS IN SINCE I DID THE SAME FOR YA'LL!!!!)

Valor:
Your verse was aight.(and it took a lot for me to say dat) But your punches...
Well you had no punches. Not a single 1 that I was feelin in tha least.

Graphex:
Your verse was good. Wordplay was tight and I WAS feelin your punches. But yo wus up wit dat beat you wit my meat shit???
Too much homo shit goin down round here.

vote graphex
Swing thru and peep this
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...872#post1290872