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Brydon 01-17-08 11:59 AM

dunmenuts vs Ambient
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines

No Recycling
No Biting
No indian votes(spul)

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-22-08 at 11:59 AM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.


Closed - By request - Brydon

System 01-17-08 12:01 PM

dunmenuts has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-08 12:01 PM.

System 01-17-08 12:17 PM

Ambient has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-17-08 12:17 PM.

Brydon 01-17-08 12:49 PM

Dunmenuts is my poker name, before you've started iv out flopped you,
you're from the uk, so no need for a plane to cum pop you.
Dont try to step to my level, you need more practice-kid,
you carry so little weight, it seems your on a diet laxative.
No need for me to come hard, jus put things into perspective,
you dont worry me, 1 bar will be more then affective.
Your talent is limited yet you hang around like dew,
your like the lottery, each week you bring happiness to only a few.
Well its time for you to go get patched up,
im'a wanted costly substance, your time is up...........

Ambient 01-17-08 01:04 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by dunmenuts
Yo anyone up for a lil battle so i can try dramatically improve my shit??????

ROFL ^

This must be a joke, you suck at battling and open mic - certainly
you COULD be a better rapper, but I don't think they do open life surgery
I'll choke dyke unmercifully, suffocating you slow would be so beautiful
& then you can be the first person who posted an invite to their own funeral
This result is unevitable, so don't post son cause I'm slaying with blades
& as soon as you utter a word, it's game over like we were playing charades
there's no conveighing this lame but maybe he's decent & and his bars are witty?
but for that to be true you'd have to consider the word decent on the same par as shitty
You aint half as gritty, this battle - I win! but a fight?, you'll know who'll ace glory
cause nuts is quick to roll up... my sleeves and hit his fucking face for me
i think you lack braincells or perhaps you're sittin on bad luck
but if ignorance is the root of stupidity...
then the racist remark in your first post proves your ignorant as fuck!

Ambient 01-25-08 11:23 PM

lol.. .

Big_O 01-28-08 04:03 PM

Voted For: Ambient

Ambient Easily took this one home Dunmenuts is a joke
"This must be a joke, you suck at battling and open mic - certainly
you COULD be a better rapper, but I don't think they do open life surgery"
Line was ILL ripped dunmenuts in half


Dunmenuts - you are a fucking joke..
"Dunmenuts is my poker name, before you've started iv out flopped you,
you're from the uk, so no need for a plane to cum pop you."
^Thats FUCKING Stupid...Just Quit rapverse...

Yo dunmenuts is you gay? I see all these qoutes of you being gay then you say things like "cum pop you" all tthough I knew how you meant it...Coming from you shits WHACK!!

Brydon 01-28-08 04:31 PM

I agree with your vote...........

But shut the fuck up! And stop hanging around the public toilets all the time, you will get a name for yourself.

Ever thought im jus learning the tricks to the trade cock blower???????

Brydon 01-28-08 04:34 PM

Cum pop you, means like kill, shoot, punch, how else could your gay imagination interpret that???

Brydon 02-06-08 06:45 PM

Vote on this shit!!!!!!!!! thanks.................

SkepTik 02-25-08 02:48 PM

Voted For: Ambient

Wow totaly one sided battle ambient ripped this kid

"I'll choke dyke unmercifully, suffocating you slow would be so beautiful
& then you can be the first person who posted an invite to their own funeral
This result is unevitable, so don't post son cause I'm slaying with blades
& as soon as you utter a word, it's game over like we were playing charades"

^^^thes lines were better than nuts whole verse

vote= ambient for having a better put2getha verse and having at least one effective punch totally one sided elevate nut's.............1

YungStaccz 03-02-08 02:28 PM

Voted For: dunmenuts

you got it man but why havent you posted your verse yet for our battle

Ambient 03-04-08 01:23 PM

whatsup with that bullshit? ^^
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Tu 03-05-08 03:28 AM

Voted For: Ambient

Dunmenuts is my poker name, before you've started iv out flopped you,
you're from the uk, so no need for a plane to cum pop you.
no punch...
Dont try to step to my level, you need more practice-kid,
you carry so little weight, it seems your on a diet laxative.
....weak
No need for me to come hard, jus put things into perspective,
you dont worry me, 1 bar will be more then affective.
....no
Your talent is limited yet you hang around like dew,
your like the lottery, each week you bring happiness to only a few.
....weak
Well its time for you to go get patched up,
im'a wanted costly substance, your time is up...........
....nothing

This must be a joke, you suck at battling and open mic - certainly
you COULD be a better rapper, but I don't think they do open life surgery
.....dont get it
I'll choke dyke unmercifully, suffocating you slow would be so beautiful
& then you can be the first person who posted an invite to their own funeral
....weak
This result is unevitable, so don't post son cause I'm slaying with blades
& as soon as you utter a word, it's game over like we were playing charades
....nope cheesy
there's no conveighing this lame but maybe he's decent & and his bars are witty?
but for that to be true you'd have to consider the word decent on the same par as shitty
.....weak
You aint half as gritty, this battle - I win! but a fight?, you'll know who'll ace glory
cause nuts is quick to roll up... my sleeves and hit his fucking face for me
.....idea is sound, needs better wording
i think you lack braincells or perhaps you're sittin on bad luck
but if ignorance is the root of stupidity...
then the racist remark in your first post proves your ignorant as fuck!
again idea is sound, still weak

Vote ambient better setups not great at finishing, just looks like he knows a little more on how to start a punch, but both need some practice...

Godz Child 03-07-08 04:28 PM

This was feedback posted for dunmenuts
 
cant vote yet my nigga cuz i aint got 20 post but when i get them i will vote for denmenuts


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