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~Ace~ 03-08-06 12:49 PM

~Ace~ vs Young Blaze
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

WHO EVER LOSES LEAVE RV FOR GOOD......~1~


DON'T DUCK DIS SHIT EITHER

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 03-09-06 at 12:49 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 03-08-06 02:47 PM

~Ace~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-06 02:47 PM.

~Ace~ 03-08-06 02:48 PM

U just a young blaze dawg so it'll be easy to put u out,
I'll have dis dude silent after dis like i took his mouth
I said ur WACK! dawg but i dont think u heard me,
One punch line of my shit will knock u back to jersey
Its time for me to be foul shotin shots like a glock at e-style,
Take all his battles throw them in tha floor it would make a trash pile
Even if dis dude was blessed he still wouldn't be tha best,
Counting my wins and lookin at e-style's roster wounderin whos next

System 03-08-06 08:59 PM

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-06 08:59 PM.

Young Blaze 03-08-06 09:01 PM

Lmao...at this.....Peace son


Wat a fag....kid dances wit men..how u tryin to..act hard
when more dudes shuffle wit the ace....than cheatin in cards
Dude ur wack...an thats a fact..dont play dumb
I hit ace wit such a uppercutt he fell back,
.............to the deck of cards he came from
kids Punchs are played...ur gay an wack...its a shame
He stays wit more cum lines...than wats around his name
Your raps used for toilet paper..i kno ur a noob jus tell us
i dropped a flush on ace so many times,
.......worldseries poker players were jealous
You'll never get picked up...at least i ride wit a crew
Truth is even the grafix heads in e-style would beat you
Since ur free i got...a new crew comin..u'll have a open place
It's called a crushin blow...
........droppin his nose from his face

Young Blaze 03-09-06 10:11 AM

Upppinnn..........................................

~Ace~ 03-09-06 02:29 PM

Yo i cant even see ur shit wtf is up wit dis computer.....UPPIN anyways

~Ace~ 03-12-06 01:53 PM

Uppin dis shit lets get some votes up in dis shit.....

Young Blaze 03-12-06 08:07 PM

..............uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp p

TaShay 03-12-06 10:51 PM

This was feedback posted for ~Ace~
 
Since da limit is 500 imma just drop feed..


Young Blaze...ya StruCture was Horrible....I don't know what the hell was what... at the beginning ur shyt aint rhyme...so from my point of view ya shyt was horrible...Ya Personals suCked... and ya Closer...was just stupid....up ya game, do some cyphers, then step back on the front lines, right now u need to be training..

Ace:

ur shyt, was simple as hell...but it was better than blaze, chop ur shyt up, create multis, and you'll be decent... this right here

"I'll have dis dude silent after dis like i took his mouth"

creative, but boring...lame...

but overall ya verse, had more structure, and rhythm,

keep it up

GooD LUcK..

~Ace~ 03-12-06 11:03 PM

^^^^Thanks uppin dis shit lets get some votes pplz

Trae 03-13-06 03:55 AM

This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
 
If I Had Enough Post Id Vote Young Blaze
Cuz Overall He Had A Better Verse

~Ace~ 03-13-06 01:14 PM

^^^^WACK uppin dis shit where is tha votes at up in dis bitch...

~Ace~ 03-13-06 04:15 PM

Uppin U Fuckin Crack Heads........................

Young Blaze 03-13-06 08:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by TaShay
Since da limit is 500 imma just drop feed..


Young Blaze...ya StruCture was Horrible....I don't know what the hell was what... at the beginning ur shyt aint rhyme...so from my point of view ya shyt was horrible...Ya Personals suCked... and ya Closer...was just stupid....up ya game, do some cyphers, then step back on the front lines, right now u need to be training..

Ace:

ur shyt, was simple as hell...but it was better than blaze, chop ur shyt up, create multis, and you'll be decent... this right here

"I'll have dis dude silent after dis like i took his mouth"

creative, but boring...lame...

but overall ya verse, had more structure, and rhythm,

keep it up

GooD LUcK..

^^^Lmaooooo at this wat a wweaakk vote....my structure was bad u dont even have structure.....an my personals suck lol....get out of here an take ur 03' style of text wit u


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