Murdah187 vs Burden.
 

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MurDaH187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-09 05:48 PM.

Burden. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-09 06:54 PM.

wtf @ this form shit.

you have no pride, ur a coward and now ur dead dipstick.
cuz if murmaid of honour. he's rockin a huge dress, panties & some red lipstick.
u ain't shit. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
burd'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.
you ain't in with the dope crowd. it's BDC son we those canny vets.
but if your spinal chords are well connected, one hit will leave 'um without any rep.
murda, i peepd ur ish. ur punches ain't deep thoughts.
all ur swings are remotely played. rockin' a style like baseball on wii sports.
ur so gay. plus those 04 stretched lines are an erratic model,
kid u watchmen so much it's no wonder ur verses resemble a graphic novel.

plz. bow to the text overlord burden.

told you MurDah a treat, guess you still thought you'll-Win,
gas off other sites few wins, guess he on he's chris angle shit, its just an Illusion
Haven't battle yet so don't, maybe then we'll be glad for ur contrabution's
So who cares about those 2 cent, ur like a retired artis the way u can't even draw a Conclusion

Mother fucker I'm on my g1 cell phone aand the shit wasn't writing so when I tryed to touch the screen on the box the shit hit post by mistake fucking shit....

Plez tell me there a way for me to finish posting the rest, fuck I wasn't even finish danm it fuck....


Someone plez hit me up to help me fix this plez fuck......

Voted For: Burden.

Ok a fucked battle since you both did dif amount of bars.....

so i just voted on burdens first 2 bars to try make it even, even in doing that, burden came more fresh and his punches were decent.
Murdah i gues you need to ask for re-match with u both knowing the bar count.......
Woulda been alot easier if one of you 2 set-up the battle rather then spul, that just complicated things.
Murdah you still need to sort that stretchedness in your lines, it blows your whole flow dude.

Vote: buren nice verse

Oh i get it i see now why u only done 2 bars lol.

That sucks for ya dude, ask burden to get the battle closed.Only he can get it done me thinks.

Voted For: Burden.

this was a ridiculously one sided battle...burden had better punches and worldplay...the first line gave be a laugh (the mermaid line)...that line and the Watchmen line were enough to win on their own...you were much more consistent than murdah

murdah you need to be more creative with your punches...drop wittier wordplay n shit...get those insults solid n hitting where they need to be...

and when rhyming, seriously man this aint 1986 you need to be dropping multies at a minimum...using words with more than one syllable with only the FINAL syllable rhyming is not multie rhyming and it comes across real basic

no hate though it is what it is

v/burden

I would have helped you out and edited the rest of your bars in, but you didnt post them after in the other post... kinda late now.

you have no pride, ur a coward and now ur dead dipstick.
cuz if murmaid of honour. he's rockin a huge dress, panties & some red lipstick.

vs

nothing.

murdah- you just need to work on a couple things like your multis and wordplay... get some more personals... just keep working on it man

v/ burden