ILL Fated vs Absolute.
 

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Check in by: 05-15-06 at 08:48 AM

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Absolute. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-06 08:19 AM.

ILL Fated has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-15-06 08:24 AM.

Aight Folks...
Dont get excited about'em, abs holds no steez wit relevance,
shook on traks, straining more than the knee-caps on elephants,
so you see, you'll never get propped up like a broadway musicals,
cuz..you vs. I? nah ... ya lines dont match-up like a faulty rubix cube,
aim to fail … type to get caught with the test answers,
Vent anger; Stay lumped up like barnacles on a ships anchor!
face it; Verses hold an Amish placementin need of relocation,
Stepped to mics & choked on waves like drownin chemo patients,
So you see no placement, in the same breath as I…. Sir,
Only time you blew wit authority was failing a Breathalyzer!

pfft....pz.

D'ya Hear That Ill, Ding A Ling, Thats The Knock Out Bell's Sonding
Coz This Punch's Go Lift U Higher Than A Bungee Jump Rebounding
Am Astounding Wid The Lyric's, Ill Aint Nothing But A Herb
Ya Unemployed, So How The Hell Are We Go Watch U Go To Work?
You Fucking Nerd, You Dont Deserve To Share A Battle Thread With Me
In 20 Years Time, The HighLight Of His Career, Battlin Me On RB
Ya Hardly What Id Call An Up N' Coming Future King Of Hip Hop
Coz Ya Car Rears (career) On The Road To No Where Like Cars Stuck In Grid Lock
Claims He's Godly, Shit..I Thought That Was Supposed To Be Good
But If Thats The Case,... I Guess I've Had That Word Misunderstood

Yo Fated, Best Of Luck On This Battle Ite...I Enjoyed It...No Matter The OutCome We'll Go 10 Again In The Future

G'L

Voted For: ILL Fated

u both could've came harder and ur shit was hard to read really. U need to work on ur flows. Rubix cube and musicals dont really ryme at all. but u still get my vote for making sence on ur verse.

Personals...none
punches...ILL Fated
Meta...Ill Fated
Multis...none
Vocab...Ill Fated(this is the dumbest catagory ever)

V/ goes to ill fated

ay dawg...take the time and vote in any of the battles on my sig on the real just like I did for ur battle. help a nigga out wit some good honest votes. thanks.

Voted For: Absolute.

Actually this was a fairly close battle. I had to read em over a few times.

But My vote goes to Absolute. Mainly because ILL had a hot verse but all his punches could of been said to anybody. So it didnt really effect Ab too much.

Absolute had some iight punches too,some that was direct and better than ILL's. So he gets my vote.

Return the favor.

could one of u vote in one of mine or mr ikillz battles cuz that really aint right that we put our time into ur shit and u dont return the favor for us...that shits killing the site nigga

Voted For: Absolute.

Absolute.:
D'ya Hear That Ill, Ding A Ling, Thats The Knock Out Bell's Sonding
Coz This Punch's Go Lift U Higher Than A Bungee Jump Rebounding
7/10 - Niice Opener flowed well.
Am Astounding Wid The Lyric's, Ill Aint Nothing But A Herb
Ya Unemployed, So How The Hell Are We Go Watch U Go To Work?
5/10 - Good Personal.
You Fucking Nerd, You Dont Deserve To Share A Battle Thread With Me
In 20 Years Time, The HighLight Of His Career, Battlin Me On RB
4/10 - OK.
Ya Hardly What Id Call An Up N' Coming Future King Of Hip Hop
Coz Ya Car Rears (career) On The Road To No Where Like Cars Stuck In Grid Lock
3/10 - Forced.
Claims He's Godly, Shit..I Thought That Was Supposed To Be Good
But If Thats The Case,... I Guess I've Had That Word Misunderstood
5/10 - OK Closer.
24/50

You had a pretty good verse, it flowed well for the most part, had some decent punches and wordplay in there.


ILL Fated:
Dont get excited about'em, abs holds no steez wit relevance,
shook on traks, straining more than the knee-caps on elephants,
4/10 - OK Opener.
so you see, you'll never get propped up like a broadway musicals,
cuz..you vs. I? nah ... ya lines dont match-up like a faulty rubix cube,
4/10 - OK.
aim to fail … type to get caught with the test answers,
Vent anger; Stay lumped up like barnacles on a ships anchor!
3/10 - Hmm...
face it; Verses hold an Amish placementin need of relocation,
Stepped to mics & choked on waves like drownin chemo patients,
3/10 - NO.
So you see no placement, in the same breath as I…. Sir,
Only time you blew wit authority was failing a Breathalyzer!
6/10 - Good Closer.
20/50

You had a OK verse. Nothing stood out that good besides your closer. You flowed pretty good just need to use more creative shit.


OVERALL: This was a pretty decent battle, but I have to give my vote too Abs. He used the better flow and he had harder hitten personals and punches.

Vote - Abs.

Voted For: Absolute.

Punches: Ab
Pers: Ab
Flow: Ab
Struc: Ill
Vocab: Tie

Ab Get My Vote Came Hard With Punches And Personals

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lol.......I should merk both of u for not voting on other people shit.