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[~*Lady Fiya*~] vs. Miss Avvy
Rules: 10-12 Lines Text 20-30 Lines Topical *must specify battle type at check in *pm your opponent to decide Time Limits: verse due by the 13th good luck. do not edit posts, no excuse. if you edit you will be dq'd. |
check in- avvy, i'm all for text..
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is Miss Avvy doin' this or not?
either way shes gotta post her verse by wednsday, so dont sweat it, if she dont have her verse in wednsday by midnight, ya win. and move on to the next round. |
ya ya sorry for not checking in earlier just had alot of shit to do. Anyway I am checking in and I too am down for text
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^how many lines, i say at the most 8 cuz, i didn't think u were gonna check in and it's due tonight i believe, so i'ma drop sumthin' real quick in the next 3 minutes, cuz my comp. at home's fucked, good luck, 8 lines=4 bars.. cool wit it?
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aight since u ain't responded and i have no way of knowin' if u will or not, here's 8 quick linez.. i'm out...
Missin’ avy and text skillz, tamed? u better off just runnin’ away got no battles hosted, n 13 forum u posted now ur experience say.. Quote:
..of course ma, this mod's taken ya courage , ya stupidity is bliss like the tongue-less given a kiss.. monitor ya lyrics get off my pic with no gift,talent left when ya checked the tourney can’t even diss the one above ya, so challenged if ya hit the front lines u’ll still miss you do audio? ya best work-site state remains mo’ blank than ya title this won’t work for you, ur measurement dresses-up as Blinkz in bridal |
sorry ma for not responding, I just been away from my computer... Anyway if you wanna do 8 lines max then its okay.. I had 10 made up and I will post them but if we are just going by 8 then ppl can judge me by 10 lines minus two...??
anyway good luck to you too. Lady Fiya been taken… Ya can’t get a “hit” even if you spit ill shit Your “Flame” no longer be burning... like the KKK was getting ripped! Rip you off like a terrorist running through you and putting out your “Fire” (Fiya) Crown you with piercing Barbed wire and make you admire your fallen empire! Your pic requires "Haters to take a Bath" … Why? You can’t face the truth? Peeps wanna dick-ryde you, your easy to get… Your Avatar is living proof! I’m fireproof, you can’t harm me… sixteen and five? Your dull, I’m sharp as 10 knives With your will to win, ya won’t survive and your ass will end up in the RV archives! You strive to be shit? Or is that just a habit like Jennifer Lopez’s marriages? Five losses soon to be disparaging six… consider this battle one of your "miscarriages!" |
Lady Fiya been taken… Ya can’t get a “hit” even if you spit ill shit
Your “Flame” no longer be burning... like the KKK was getting ripped! ^^not clear punch, but ok Rip you off like a terrorist running through you and putting out your “Fire” (Fiya) Crown you with piercing Barbed wire and make you admire your fallen empire! ^^a little violent imagery here which is cool, but punch made no sense 2 me (make u admire ur fallen empire) Your pic requires "Haters to take a Bath" … Why? You can’t face the truth? Peeps wanna dick-ryde you, your easy to get… Your Avatar is living proof! ^^1st line went over my head...2nd line was ok personal dis. I’m fireproof, you can’t harm me… sixteen and five? Your dull, I’m sharp as 10 knives With your will to win, ya won’t survive and your ass will end up in the RV archives! ^^^this was a ok closer. Quote:
This is difficult to judge. With all due respect, in my opinion no one came hard here. No outstanding punches to reflect on. U guys are both using stats that are inaccurate becuz they are everchanging. hmmm ok, Im going to have to use my intricate point format to determine this winner. TO SEE DETAILED EXPLANATION ON VOTE CLICK HERE! ok if u read that ^^ u see the tally at the end was FIYA =6.1 AVY =6.6 so Avy got it. Nice battle yall. *respect* |
lol^^got all nerd wit it with the voting...
but im going to have to go with Lady on this one...both should have came alot harder at eachother there coulda been more hard hitting punches.. but like va said this is the first round so hopefulyl in the second round whom ever wins can do better..but i gotta give it to lady .she was just more consistant with her lines where as avvy's didnt really connect like they were supposed to. |
this is very tough to judge, i am not a fan of links in verses, because it takes away from actual talent with words and makin up punches, lady, had good punches, but the whole verse was links, no hate gurl, just a personal preference, but your vocabulary is well put together, and you have an original style, i just wish you wouldn't hide it in links....basically,umm, miss avy, i have no idea who you are, but i guess we'll be seein more of you, your verse was good, you used all the vocabulary and punches you needed to make up for not knowing youre opponent or this site well yet, i give you props for not using links as your whole verse,and using more vocab, and your punches were decent, i liked the last bar, and the haters take a bath bar,,readers know what you are saying by looking at your verse, not clicking on it....so, my vote goes to,,MISS AVY
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[QUOTE=~Miss Avy~]sorry ma for not responding, I had 10 made up and I will post them but if we are just going by 8 then ppl can judge me by 10 lines minus two...??
^ayo, i don't care bout the line limits and whatever, i just wanted a response cuz i had to rush my verse yesterday cuz i was at school, so whatever with this, good luck... |
close battle, but my decision comes down to personals and punches... i fully believe miss avvy had a great verse, filled with punches and wordplay to kick those punches past decent, so respect to you. ya both had vocab strengths and structure weaknesses. ya both had bomb closures and aight openers, lady fiya didnt have stronger punches than miss avvy in my opinion but her rhymes were direct personals, which miss avvy lacked, and i was looking for who could hit there opponent harder, punches do great damage, but personals truely affect the viewer, so nice battle to both...
vote: lady fiya update: (2-2) uppin |
this was a pretty close battle... i have know idea who miss avvay is but i'm sure we'll be hearing a lot more from her in the future...
Missin’ avy and text skillz, tamed? u better off just runnin’ away got no battles hosted, n 13 forum u posted now ur experience say.. Quote: Originally Posted by ~Miss Avy~ Imma be sick ..of course ma, this mod's taken ya courage , ya stupidity is bliss like the tongue-less given a kiss.. monitor ya lyrics get off my pic lines weren't as hard as she usually drops 'em but the personals are crazy! with no gift,talent left when ya checked the tourney can’t even diss the one above ya, so challenged if ya hit the front lines u’ll still miss wasn't feeling this bar you do audio? ya best work-site state remains mo’ blank than ya title this won’t work for you, ur measurement dresses-up as Blinkz in bridal killer closer... shyt was hot Lady Fiya been taken… Ya can’t get a “hit” even if you spit ill shit Your “Flame” no longer be burning... like the KKK was getting ripped! weak opener here...sorry... just my opinion Rip you off like a terrorist running through you and putting out your “Fire” (Fiya) Crown you with piercing Barbed wire and make you admire your fallen empire! ehhh... ok use of multies but no real punch Your pic requires "Haters to take a Bath" … Why? You can’t face the truth? Peeps wanna dick-ryde you, your easy to get… Your Avatar is living proof! hahaaaa...lol... sick line right there! all ya joints shoulda hit like this! I’m fireproof, you can’t harm me… sixteen and five? Your dull, I’m sharp as 10 knives With your will to win, ya won’t survive and your ass will end up in the RV archives! i like how ya finished the bar but the set-up was a little weak You strive to be shit? Or is that just a habit like Jennifer Lopez’s marriages? Five losses soon to be disparaging six… consider this battle one of your "miscarriages!" again... killer closer! ok... both verses were pretty basic this time around but omma have to go with LadyFiya based on consistancy... both had killer closers but LF had way more personals... props to MA for holding her own being that LF was here longer and knows how to drop her shyt to impress the voters... i could see her being one of the best femcees the site has ever seen... but she got some comp creepin on a come up!... good shyt y'all... keep droppin it like it's hot |
Lady Fiya wins, due to the 3 vote standard.
CLOSED. |
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