NewKid vs AckRite
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Jea...G'Luck :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-21-05 at 09:15 PM

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AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 08:47 PM.

NewKid has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 08:58 PM.

look....

u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night
ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite?
u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b
LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G'
ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg
nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off'

chris tucker played n da movie money talks mah rv name NewKid mah nik name G came meanin 'orgy' wordplay

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Voted For: NewKid

kid took this easy....

overall a really bad battle... i was who's didn't suck more.. both of you need to work on your punches and set ups.. both of your vocabs sucked....newkid work on your spelling... and ackrite... fix your structure...overall though newkid will take this i think partially because he had more creative punches...ackrite... cum jokes are played so are head jokes...overall both of you need to up.. but becuse newkid came with some less weak stuff he's gonna get it..

Vote//New Kid

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i voted on two of your battles...honestly...pay me

Voted For: AckRite

Punches-AcK....Da NeWkiD LiNe WaS FiRe LoL...aloNg WiT Da ToLL LiNe

Multis-None...DiDnt reaLLy sEe aNy

Vocab-AcK...Better usage of words

Personals-None....didnt really see any...BotH EmCeEs ShoUld aDd mOre oF TheSe iN FuturE BaTtLeS

Opener-AcK

Closer-AcK

Good battle

Closer-

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Jeah.............THANKS @ Non...........You Really Boasted My Confidence << Sarcasm...But W.E. This Was A Quick One

UPPIN'

Voted For: AckRite

Ak:

Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul
Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'!
8/10 nice openor sweet to the point
Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did
He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid!
7/10 ok good punch
Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim
Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'!
7/10 good closer

Overal: 22/30

New kid:
u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night
ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite?
10/10 good punch line good opener
u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b
LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G'
5/10 to plain
ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg
nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off'
6/10 good closer

Overall: 21/30

v/ Aktrite close battle but he gets it

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