Killah Bwoy vs triple N
 

here we go this is a round 2 we;ve both gotten much better

10 lines
blind spit ( i aint no bitch i aint gon say you go first...fair battle)
no feedin
3 hours to post after check in
no d/r cv or biting
good luck

checkin' in but 3 hours is to much time, make it 45 mins

no jus incase u ened time..im droppin now so it dont really matter..........checkin in

Dis is no competition Blast ya with my Lyrikal Ammunition get rid of my opposition../
Walkin under ladders FUCK superstition still beatin you bitch,ASUME THE POSITION../
'Spit razor sharp lyrics..Touch the screen and you'll wind up with ya hands missin'../
Like a fat bitch tryin' to walk to the store, Beatin me is a Fuckin' "Mission"...../
I Cause total annihalation This kid can't "drop shit" like a kid with constepation..../
"Your soo cool Bwoy"smack ya in da face,im tryna battle not hold no conversation../
rearrange ya face cause ya rhymes are ugly like a michael jackson mascalation.../
Read the tutorials I master the arts of rappin' while this bitch "masters- Batin"..../
Bwoy: come on dawg stop jackin off and drop ur verse...N:SHH im consentratin.../
Its ova dawg dont even drop jus' because i beat you again you aint gotta be hatin../



good luck dawg.....

can yall drop an honest vote on here.....please i'll hit this up when yall have spat

QUICKPUNCH VS T12U3 K1LlA

oh and wen i sed in ther line its a fuckin mission...its slang for thats hard

Faggot niggas like you garanteed to be left on wax
This bitch like a musical instrument, blowin' on dick like it was a sax
You won't get dap, cuz there's no gay rights in rap
No one's gonna root for an emcee that hugs more nuts that "jockstraps"
Always talkin' bout u hard, when in a real fight u wanna mix an mingle
Claimin u bust shots, only thing this bitch pops is "pringles"
I'm a do like Ja an 50 an squash this beef like I was lewis farracon
Wastin' my time, ya rhymes couldn't generate heat if they was wearin' "long johns"
I'm put more pains in ya gut than ab crunches
You beat me, never!, I've felt breast harder than your punches
Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer
Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player
This nigga emulates rapper's likes, he wants to scream like "lil john"
All the gurls scream when ya drop ya pants cuz ya got a "lil jon"
He was put in this forum jus to annoy, he mad cuz I'm the real mccoy
One look at ya pic an I almost died of fright, I guess that why they call u "Killa Bwoy"


Hold That son, would have dropped 15 mins ago but erased my shit by accident..lol

wtf i sed 10 lines............................................

oh my bad son, i jus got so deep in my rhymes that I wasn't even thinkin'

yo TRIPLE_N ur STRUCTURE Took it away but good shit dogg

KILLAH you had da SHIT GOin Da PUNCHES n everthing DIS IS A CLOSE BATTLe

TRIP)_n

FLow 7/10
RHymes 9/10
Structure 4/10
20/30

KILLAH

Flow 8/10
Rhymes 8/10
Structure 6/10
22/30

Good battles guyz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

ok well Killa Bwoy i was feeling ur lines

Vocab and Structure:
Ok vocab pretty complex used lots of big words and shit like dat... also your vocab was killer compared 2 TripleN... structure was good aswell

Personals and Punchlines:
This would be ur strogest point in the battle i was feeling ur verses especially
'Spit razor sharp lyrics..Touch the screen and you'll wind up with ya hands missin'../
Like a fat bitch tryin' to walk to the store, Beatin me is a Fuckin' "Mission"...../
I Cause total annihalation This kid can't "drop shit" like a kid with constepation..../
that what got u my vote...

Flow and Rythmicness:
Your lines flowed exspecially well and the rythmicness of your ryhmes was good as well...



TripleN was really feeling ur lines so much

Vocab and Structure:
vocab was ok but Killa beat u on dis... u need to use more complex and big words... and structure was the same as killa's...

Punchlines and Personals:
You had a bit less they hit pretty strong but not strong enough to get my vote...

Flow and rythmicness:
ok ur lines flow was really good and same wit the rythmicness...

Over all:
ok my vote goes 2 Killa Bwoy cuz he had better punchlines and personals and they hit hadder also, he had some mad vocab...
Winner: Killa Bwoy

uppin for some well explained honest votes, holla!!

yo dope battle
very close call
so heres my breakdown

punches= tie> both had some tight punches that were interestin and creative
vocab= tie> i think both had some gud use of diction in there
structure/flow= this goes to tripleN to me b/c he had some better transitions between lines and the whole thing flowed a lil better than killahs
complexity= tripleN again b/c I like the way he set up his punches, and he had some koo play on words in there(lil john)
personals= again a tie, both had some koo burns

overall winner= barely b/c this was a very competitive battle but i go with tripple b/c i think he wanted it more 4 my reasons above

fav. line: "Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer
Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player"

hit my battles yall
peace

I would give Killah Bwoy for his flow and Triple for his personals. However, Triple went over in lines and plus I was feelin the whole of Killa Bwoy's verse whereas it was only towards the end I really got into it. Both verses are excellent though but my vote will go to Killah Bwoy.

Vote on these two links (honest votes) plz:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121363
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120624
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121373

Here we go.....

Killah bwoy came with some stretched lines that didn't have that bad of a flow since they were all atretched to the same length....

Dis is no competition Blast ya with my Lyrikal Ammunition get rid of my opposition../
Walkin under ladders FUCK superstition still beatin you bitch,ASUME THE POSITION../
^^^This is an example of a stretched line. It ruins the rhythem all together.....
It also didn't have any punch in there. people didn't see that all his attempts at punches were mediocre....

Bwoy: come on dawg stop jackin off and drop ur verse...N:SHH im consentratin.../
Its ova dawg dont even drop jus' because i beat you again you aint gotta be hatin../
^^^Weak closer too.....where's the punch? I understand that you freestyled the whole verse but you could have thrown in a couple of punches just to mix things up...


Triple_N came with a basic flow that did flow through out the verse. This made the whole verse easier to read. He had a few stretched lines but not that many......

Faggot niggas like you garanteed to be left on wax
This bitch like a musical instrument, blowin' on dick like it was a sax
You won't get dap, cuz there's no gay rights in rap
No one's gonna root for an emcee that hugs more nuts that "jockstraps"

^^^ Kinda weak for an opener but atleast there was a punch in there......Triple had soem pretty weak attempts at punches but a few did hit a little.....

Compared to yours my rhymes are athletic, I'm the killa bwoy slayer
Ya shit is basic an fundamental like a white basketball player

^^^ Most original punch in the battle. It hit kinda hard too.....Triple_N just came with more punches in this one and I think that's what wins battles.....

Vote - Triple_N