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docholiday 04-13-07 08:58 AM

Final Thoughts
 
Final Thoughts

As I stand among the whispering tree's
Stare un-seeing at the fallen leaves
Your voice echoes from so long before
Before life closed you outside it's door

Your words " it's only a bit of puff, i'll stop when i've had enough."

The leaves they rustle with the sound
Of raining tears upon the ground

You said " Mom it's just a bit of weed."
Then soon followed a bit of speed

Dont worry I can quit anytime
Back then believing every line

Too late you felt the needle push
Seduced again by a sudden rush

One day you knew it all to late
The devils quest had sealed your fate

" I love you," I shouted to un-hearing tree's
" I miss you," the words are lost on a frozen breeze

In this place seeking solace where there's none to be found
Just your memories scattered with the leaves on the ground

Ask yourself this as your life starts to drain
Was it worth losin Love for the rush and the pain

docholiday 04-13-07 09:09 AM

Links

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240951
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241067


Peace.

deluzional 04-14-07 12:31 AM

daym dawg, i was feeling this peace hella, cuhz im in da same situation and yeh gotta think over dis shyt. but yeh mayn the structure was simple, but dope it was easy to follow and u can get a sense of the character goin deeper and depper until it was too late. i liked the ending too


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