Dominator -vs- Crooked Comical
 

20 min from his checkin
10 lines

Alright I Check In

Spit



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Both verses due by 3 PM EST
or DQ.... No exception
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Ima Surprise Your Ass Really Bad,Like I Got You In Chris Cringle*/
Goin Against Me Bitch Youll Be " Fallin " Like Alecia Keys 1st Single/
Ill Smash You , Ive Already WON And The Battle Aint Even DONE/
Dont Even Try To Battle , Just Make Like Forest Gump And RUN/
Im The King ,I Dont Sing But Ill Still Hit Any Motherfukin High Pitch/
Ill be Hittin High C's With The Screams Of This Lil Whiny Bitch/
Im Entertaining,I Bring You Low To The Ground N Hang You High/
I Aint Gona Read Your Boring Verse,Id Rather Whatch Paint Dry/
Battling Me , You Know Ill Beat Your Ass Slick,Easy And Quick/
Makin You Look Like A BIGGER ASS Then The 1 In Your Display Pic/


*Chris Cringle Is Where A Group Gets together And Random People Buy Random People Gifts


Peace

His mind sight is in disarray... He doesn't understand the scenario
Lack of talent and knowledge.. are why no rappers are from Ontario
Its pathetic when a newbie is droppin down 95 posts per day
The way ill feast on this herb, it'll be like an all you can eat buffet
Cuz just like the wigga in your avatar, dawg your style is plain
This kids avoiding the truth like a presidential campaign
Bit'ing peoples lines, just so that he can say that hes a crook
Yet you still can't spit a hook, your don't deserve a second look
Im like shark meat and your tuna...... the difference is astronomical
Yet you think you have a chance? No wonder they call you comical

Fuck nice battle and very close!
Laydown:
Opening:Dominator
Punches:tie
Multis:Comical
Metaphors:Dominator definetly took it herre
Vocabulary:Dominator
Structure:Comical
Flow:Comical
Closing:Comical
Overall:Comical Tight battle bois!

If you guys could hit this up with a vote I'd really appreciate it.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99687

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...080#post1005080

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100301

Ahh shit I didnt' mean those little smile things haha you know who it is though....................................that looks funny..............
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UPPIN ****** # 1


MC PROFIT PLEASE POLL YOUR VOTE THANX

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i can't vote buit i think this battle goes to crooked he rhymed lil bit more then Dominator...
but this was some hot battle ...
good job boys..........

UPPIN # 2 !!!!!

COME ON YALL VOTE ... ILL REPAY FAVOUR DROP YA LINK

PEACE

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yo i gotta go wit dominator on this one
both drops were good but dominator had that edge that won him this
wordplay/draw
style/Dominator
flow/draw
punches/draw
person/draw
multi/draw
open/draw
closer/Dominator
vote/D...
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I gotta give this very close battle to crooked just for the fact that the enjoyment level was so high and the punches came so steadily it made for a better read. Dom came at hi hard and intellectually but for some reason that kind of took the umphh out of it. Seemed a lil boring after reading that drop from crooked. If dom would have dropped first I definitely would have felt it more.

THANX

UPPIN # 3

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Yo dom start uppin this thing Man I Only Got 2 Uppins left

Uppin # 4 *********************************** VOTECOME ON FUCK MAN LOL ************************************************** **************VOTE AND DROP A LINK I ALWAYS RETURN FAVOUR WITH HONEST VOTES