Wild fire VS. M.F.P
 

rules:

No dick ridin(in verse or votes)
No crew votes
no hatin(in votes)
10 bars(no less) to 30 bars (no more)
any of the guidlines not followed that are listed above will result in automatic loss

you spit first, good luck

wild fire wants to challenge me/
but he wont leave me cuz he's a fucking bee/
wild fire?
ha u might as well jus retire/
i dont see how u on fire wen u suck ur daddy's dick/
u make me so damn sick/
ur more a potato skin/
than micheal jackson's skin/
my rap's are so conspicious;
while urs are so ridiculous/
ur fucking gay/
so hit the hay/
i ain't gonna deal wit u no more
u hore

I can see your a beginner so i'm gonna take it easy on you/
but regardless of that when your girl meets me she gon cheat on you/
cause see those weak rhymes leave you lookin illite-rate/
cause i sleep, at the same time it's you i obblite-rate/
this isn't difficult for me, it's like i'm a natural/
in that verse everything was a lie, and mine is all factual/
cause see i am lie detector, i seperate fake from real/
and i know you couldn't have soul if you made the devil a deal/
this is too easy so my rhymes gonna be mininum/(lacking in skill and only 10 bars)
keep bring me to the contest..cause i'll keep winnin em/

uppin for votes............................................. .........

lop sided victory
fire was spittin da flames and i don think he tried i wouldnt have either

MFP u had a simple ass verse da whole shit sound like a kindergarden shit u gotz 2 elvate and use yo vocab pimp..

punches fire
vocab-fire
structure-fire
closing-fire
flow-fire'
win-fire

aight..uppin for votes..i realize it's not a hot battle...but lets get it closed and get it off the main board...

This was an easy ass battle to call Wildfire kilt dat kid an didn't even try
punches: fire
Vocab: fire
Structure: fire
opener: fire
closer: fire
vote: fire
yo mfp just keep working at it man everybody losses early on, jus brush it off an stay it son, aye holl back
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118296

ok, its like this. neither of you had any punches, but at least wildfire didn't post this:

"ur more a potato skin/
than micheal jackson's skin/"

battle was over when that was posted. (a) don't rhyme a word with itself, (b) you gotta actually give a punch, that shit makes no sense and (c) that shit is waaay too short, got no flow if you have lines like that.

i wasn't tryin man...i saw his verse..and didn't wanna waist classic lines...I'm sure you know what thats like...anyways..thanks for the vote...uppin

two more votes is all i need...vote on this and I'll return the favor if i havn't already voted for you...thanks

good job wild fire yeah ur rap was a lot betta than mine but i'll get u next time

till then peace

Vote Wild

Yo mfp, make lines longer, dont put the / anymore, diss him on his rap skills, not sex, never rap about him and sex or anything of that sort, you'll elevate, i'll help you.

Wild, you act like your good, but you suck, answer my callout.

what the fuck you talkin about...i don't act like I'm good...i don't think i'm good...i don't care if I'm good or if i'm not..im in it to get better...I'm new at this whole thing...if you don't like my work...i don't give a fuck...and i won't untill you show me somethin...take it or leave it

i thought M.F.P did good his flow was nice and he dissed wildfire well

^damn people dont know how to vote

wildfire ate this kid up like a patato skin lol waznt much of a verse but didnt need much beat him any way u can beat somebody
best lines
cause see i am lie detector, i seperate fake from real/
and i know you couldn't have soul if you made the devil a deal/

Mfp dang just elevate use different shit an get creative instead of mike jackson punchlines come on now step ya game up

vote wildfire

vote on my shit