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Group C: LyricALI vs SPuL
 So you made it through week one. Congrats. We revamped the roster again due to the few no shows and sign outs. Stay on top of your games because now is when the going gets tough. The hype has ended, your into your 7 week season, and it only is starting to heat up. Going 0-2 will be hard to come back from but anythings possible. Getting to 2-0 will be a great start but doesnt guarantee a playoff spot. Show off your best punches and have some fun. Lay it all out on the lines and dont leave any doubt that your the best in the group. Goodluck guys.. Battler #1: LyricALI Battler #2: SPuL Battles go up Sunday night Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET) Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET) Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET) 5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET) Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do: - Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding. - If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed - Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. Even if it's a no show win, if you dont leave links.. you lose. - If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates. |
WTF im up against this gay?
fuck it dont wanna wait til wednesday... "I'll Pay u if u give me links to vote" is what you said back in the day What you shoulda just said was "lookin for a new dick to stroke" Dont know if you people use this structure here on RV or not but its gunna start http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233079 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233076 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233065 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233075 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233070 |
yo i got this clown Led Poetic? banned like 20 times. yo check it...
How long till your next ban? Shit, I won't give it long You been banned so much, you're now sponsored by Livestrong You got lot of problems here. I'll make a list, but first.. Your check-in rhymed. What's worse?.. .. it was better than your actual verse! EZ |
Damn herbish calm down... i said i'd post the second one later tonight.
don't even go there with biting son, i got you locked on defeat this kid disses me for livinstrong, ....................well damn you must be weak For those who dont know he was banned for biting. |
"I'll Pay u if u give me links to vote"
is what you said back in the day What you shoulda just said was "lookin for a new dick to stroke" Lame, unoriginal.. didn't hit hard. and so on How long till your next ban? Shit, I won't give it long You been banned so much, you're now sponsored by Livestrong eh i feel like i've seen this before.. doesn't hit too hard to me anyway. You got lot of problems here. I'll make a list, but first.. Your check-in rhymed. What's worse?.. .. it was better than your actual verse! lol iight cuz.. it's probably true lol. don't even go there with biting son, i got you locked on defeat this kid disses me for livinstrong, ....................well damn you must be weak nah.. you coulda worded this better to make it hit harder.. coulda been a lot better feed. well this battle wasn't good but spul's first line compared to lyricali's was better cuz it's LESS played and he went more personal anyway.. his second one was funny and true lol.. lyricali's didn't hit hard to me and coulda been worded better. v/ Spul |
"I'll Pay u if u give me links to vote"
is what you said back in the day What you shoulda just said was "lookin for a new dick to stroke" wtf, this was wack. it didnt hit at all don't even go there with biting son, i got you locked on defeat this kid disses me for livinstrong, ....................well damn you must be weak you coulda feed off his punch better.. u didnt execute it well vs How long till your next ban? Shit, I won't give it long You been banned so much, you're now sponsored by Livestrong this was ok.. decent punch You got lot of problems here. I'll make a list, but first.. Your check-in rhymed. What's worse?.. .. it was better than your actual verse! lmao trueeee. lyricalls 1st punch was horrible.. spuls was obviously better.. and spuls second punch was the punch of the battle..soo.. v/ spul |
WTF im up against this gay?
fuck it dont wanna wait til wednesday... ^this actually rhymed.. "I'll Pay u if u give me links to vote" is what you said back in the day What you shoulda just said was "lookin for a new dick to stroke" ^too bad ur punch didn't. that shit was a mad gay style, set up and just all around lame punch. i mean, this was uncreative like the FUCK! How long till your next ban? Shit, I won't give it long You been banned so much, you're now sponsored by Livestrong ^play'd concept. and the wordin wasn't even harsh to make it fresh. should've been made more harsh for more of an effective execution. You got lot of problems here. I'll make a list, but first.. Your check-in rhymed. What's worse?.. .. it was better than your actual verse! ^once again, ur wording hurt you here. this could've been somethin witty with the right wordin. i see what u were goin for, but it failed with the shotty wordin. still, better than led's shit. don't even go there with biting son, i got you locked on defeat this kid disses me for livinstrong, ....................well damn you must be weak ^ok, this could've been a decent fed punch. like with spul, ur wordin is what killed it. not harsh, nor fresh @ all(and i've never seen it used).. so thats bad. ok, this was a meh battle. Led Poetic barely had shit that kept me readin(and its just 1 bar) so that means, STEP YOUR SHIT UP! spul, well.. i know you can do better. for some reason i guess u felt like half assin it, but u still had enough for the win. both come more harsh and more fresh next week. v/ Spul |
alright spul took this easy....the live strong punch was ok...and his 2nd one was what hit hard..shit was true as could possibly be...besides that one punch...the other was sorta lame..and led poetic was just garbage this time around
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"I'll Pay u if u give me links to vote"
is what you said back in the day What you shoulda just said was "lookin for a new dick to stroke" dickryding.. kinda played concept though, kinda corny too How long till your next ban? Shit, I won't give it long You been banned so much, you're now sponsored by Livestrong eh, ight at best You got lot of problems here. I'll make a list, but first.. Your check-in rhymed. What's worse?.. .. it was better than your actual verse! lol, decent don't even go there with biting son, i got you locked on defeat this kid disses me for livinstrong, ....................well damn you must be weak weak feed, you coulda squeezed way more juic outta the concept v/ spul, just had the better two punches. only really felt his second one though. |
This battle sucked ass......I'm not even voting on this malarkey :mad:
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5 links up= you're done flash.
bitch ~_~ |
Led -Wasn't liking Led first punch, it was a werid style yeah, but it was also played. conecpt been used to many times for me to critic it.
his second punch was a decent feed, if worded better then it could of been alot better. and a heads up next time led, there is no need for ............. - when u have a 3 line setup. Spul - I'm liking the first punch. good personal and had some wit to go with. and lol @ ur 2nd punch, didnt even notice he ryhmed his check in. v/spul. this was a one sided battle, as Led first punch was really horrible. iono what he was thinking. |
Flash:
"I'll Pay u if u give me links to vote" is what you said back in the day What you shoulda just said was "lookin for a new dick to stroke" ^^Personally i dont like the style but im not gonna vote based on that, the personal was ok but besides that this bar was average don't even go there with biting son, i got you locked on defeat this kid disses me for livinstrong, ....................well damn you must be weak ^^this was subpar as well, if you worded it differently i woulda liked it more but it was also just average Overall: 4.5/10 SPuL: How long till your next ban? Shit, I won't give it long You been banned so much, you're now sponsored by Livestrong ^^ok personal in the setup, kinda played how you worded it but the meta in the 2nd line was dope. i like that. You got lot of problems here. I'll make a list, but first.. Your check-in rhymed. What's worse?.. .. it was better than your actual verse! ^^another ok personal, like led it coulda been worded a bit better but overall it was ok Overall: 6.5/10 Vote: SPuL I felt he won this battle with the livestrong punch it was a good meta and the setup to it was decent. |
SPuL wins (2-0)
LyricALI loses (1-1) |
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