*DYNASTY* vs Unrealghost
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 09:27 PM

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Unrealghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 08:57 PM.

*DYNASTY* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 09:09 PM.

VERY QUICK KEYSTYLE.......


...Unreal Soul Gets Sealed Quick Ya Whole Family'll Feel It I'm Known For Exposin Skirt Wearin Bitches becouse I Kilt It...
...Ill Attack kats And Hold Heat For Fag Packs Unreals bars Like A Thong A Line That Rest Half Assed...
...I do this for every occasion, tossin out mind abrasions, beat me? Ya chances slimmer than the eyes of an Asian...
...I Give Sessions to teach Lessons by Talk of Flame, Put ur Face In the Sidewalk and Chalk ya Name...
...Cause i keep Impressions of Legends Like The Hollywood Walk of Fame...
...Your rhymes need correction, and without question I'm givin Hayb more Blackouts than KKK Conventions...

Ima rip ur guts thru yo eyes so then you would acctually 'Die-Nasty'(dynasty)
searchin for victims didnt think that i would let u go Right-Past-me

ill KILL you stupid newbee cause i got you on Sight-and-ready
ima punch you around like ali, i aint no pussy, i Fight-with-steady

u aint no leader, so yet u still coudnt-own-me
u suck at rap in this battle ya shouldnt-have-shown-G

Voted For: *DYNASTY*

aparently dynasty forgot the limit was 6 lines........

Removed

i fucked up that was supposed to be feedback...will fix it

Voted For: *DYNASTY*

...Unreal Soul Gets Sealed Quick Ya Whole Family'll Feel It I'm Known For Exposin Skirt Wearin Bitches becouse I Kilt It...
^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCH MAYNE

Ill Attack kats And Hold Heat For Fag Packs Unreals bars Like A Thong A Line That Rest Half Assed...
^^^^^^^^^ LMAO WHAT DID U SAY LOL PUNCH MAYNE

...I do this for every occasion, tossin out mind abrasions, beat me? Ya chances slimmer than the eyes of an Asian...
^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE DAT WAS AN GOOD PUNCH
...I Give Sessions to teach Lessons by Talk of Flame, Put ur Face In the Sidewalk and Chalk ya Name...
^^^^^^^^^ DAYUM WAT!

Cause i keep Impressions of Legends Like The Hollywood Walk of Fame...
...Your rhymes need correction, and without question I'm givin Hayb more Blackouts than KKK Conventions...
^^^^^^^^^ YEA DA CLOSA WAS I-L-L

Ima rip ur guts thru yo eyes so then you would acctually 'Die-Nasty'(dynasty)
searchin for victims didnt think that i would let u go Right-Past-me
^^^^^^ O NICE OPENER AND A PUNCH

ill KILL you stupid newbee cause i got you on Sight-and-ready
ima punch you around like ali, i aint no pussy, i Fight-with-steady
^^^^^^^^^ OK KINDA AN FILLER BUT ITS COOL

u aint no leader, so yet u still coudnt-own-me
u suck at rap in this battle ya shouldnt-have-shown-G
^^^^^^^^ BOOOOOO CLOSA


DYNASTY GOT DIS HANDS DOWN HE HAD BETTER PUNCHES AND FLOW AND PERSONALS

UNREALGHOST UR GOOD BUT YO PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARDER AND DER WAS SOME FILLER IN YO VESE FIX THAT MAYNE BUT LOOK YO PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARDER

DYNASTY WON BY PUNCHES AND FLOW

~PEACE~

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This was feedback posted for *DYNASTY*
 

weak battle.

punches- nasty
personals- neither
multis- nasty
metas- nasty
word play- nasty
flow- ghost

Nasty one part of freestylin is rhymin. gotta make some of it rhyme. Other than that get some personals and you'll be good to go. ok wordplay as well

Ghost weaker verse compared to nasty. Weaker punches, no personals, but u had one thing of word play so u got that.

Nasty:
"Your rhymes need correction, and without question I'm givin Hayb more Blackouts than KKK Conventions..." nice punch and closer

ghost:
"Ima rip ur guts thru yo eyes so then you would acctually 'Die-Nasty'(dynasty)
searchin for victims didnt think that i would let u go Right-Past-me" weak opener and i chose this cuz u had wordplay in it.

v/nasty if i could vote