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Legion 03-27-05 01:52 PM

Legion vs Tstorm
 
Battle Rules:

16-20 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

topic is; behind enemy lines.

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 03-27-05 at 02:22 PM

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System 03-27-05 01:54 PM

Legion has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 01:54 PM.

System 03-27-05 01:56 PM

Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 01:56 PM.

Legion 03-27-05 02:19 PM


`Behind enemy lines

Enemy in sight, trying not to feed off a glimmer of light.
Nocturnal images dance around the flickers of shell impact in the night.
We’re outnumbered, outgunned and stand no ground of prevailing.
But our Marshal pushes our limits, and our morale continues its sailing.
Bombs plummet, and cascades of soil rise above us, blinding me.
Enemy was on the move, in OUR direction, or so it seems.
Our team begins to sweat, swallowing our pride hard and willing to die.
Destruction looms, and winds around my emotions, thoughts, and my eye.
Stirring motions amongst us, inspire anxiety to dominate silence, and bloom.
Shaken images of our death riddles my mind, will I persevere through this doom?
Our location is unknown our forces are oblivious to our situation, peril in the air.
But then, if our presence is not known, if we die, no-one will really care.
We’re ready for the attack, bullets and water flask gripped tightly in my palm.
*Bullets fly, our enemy launches an ambush*
Caps rendezvous in motion, tearing through flesh, and dismember the marshal’s arm.
Our leader is wounded, in a fatal stage of shock, my rifle; bound to cock.
Enemy firmly locked, obliterating my men and weapons they’ve jocked.
I’m the only survivor, escaped the ambush, was this meant to be or was it a sign?
Carrying a guilty conscience as a burden, never again ending behind enemy lines.
Just did 18, cant be fucked, good luck.

Re~Verb 03-27-05 02:20 PM

As the wind swirls, dust clouds embrase this dessolate land
gun shaking in my hand..scared,bruised,boots filled with sand
i shiver,stationed here behind the sandbags is like hells torture
petrified,i can hear the screams and scenes of human deborture
a test like no other..enemy closes,and i pray god keeps me cover
thoughts of my family left alone, and dreams of my distant lover
the incontrolable desire within me to flee, grabs hold and i stumble
flash back, must gain control..i start to hear a distant rumble
a wall to my left suddenly crumbles..i jump in a state of panic
troops around me grab there rifles..the scene is somewhat manic

my weather hand slowly reaches around, i manage to grab my rifle.
actions must be quick, positive and decisive now..no time to stifle
a vision of blurred aura appears and changes state through my scope
i cant stop the shaking, but somehow i manage to pickout his throat
the bullet tears through his skin, and guilt fills my soul with dread
im frozen in a state of panic as before me my enemy lays..dead..

i cant see my troops..its too dark on this dusty damp cold night
my lifes flashing before my eyes..as the enemy has me in there sights
i know its the end..my vision blurs, i know im set to meet my maker
strangely theres no pain, all i see is my family..in fact i feel safer

Legion 03-27-05 02:34 PM

Nice verse, should be close, upping this.

Re~Verb 03-27-05 04:19 PM

yup......
u came hot wit tha vocab.
i underestimated u.....

u deff no newb.lol

upp.........

vote..n one will b returned.......

Legion 03-28-05 04:19 AM

My lines are a bit streteched, def didnt look stretched in the post preview.
Upping.

Legion 03-28-05 06:05 AM

Upping this, up, up, up, up, up, up................

Legion 03-28-05 08:16 AM

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Re~Verb 03-28-05 11:45 AM

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Legion 03-30-05 04:41 AM

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Re~Verb 03-31-05 02:46 PM

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Re~Verb 04-01-05 05:33 PM

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Re~Verb 04-05-05 05:21 PM

up
 
please excuse me, im just trying to raise this to the top of the pile


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