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~~Napping Thru Reality~~
i dont awake from sleep cause im asleep while awake
a never ending dream state that i cant seem to shake changes to make, but those are risks not easy to take routines to break, but im just a fiend for mistake pain stakenly fake, i cant believe my own thoughts a long line of bullshit thats always coming up short lie to myself for sport cause the ball is rarely in my court cant handle reality at all, so i just let it go & abort my mind's a resort, taking vacation from the everyday in each & every way i cant reach the place im destined to stay im dressed for success only to let stress & regret stain away any hopes for today, anyway.. tommorow is not a given as the world turns my head never stops spinnin from start to begining, im sitting amid harsh critisism & constant riticule is so habitual, its become a bitch ritual for some people who, consider it cool to mark Rich a fool What, When, Where & Who gave you the permission too? that, in addition to, all this bull im forced to listen to its just sick and pitiful, these rules are set up just to limit you its dispicable, its become an issue to make life less hospitable thats it, my eyes are full... and these lies are true so what's a mixed up crooked mind to do? go back, first line, peep... sleep and keep rewinding........ through!!!! |
IF YOU READ THEN REPLY... ITS NOT HARD TO FIGURE OUT!!!!
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that was some ill shit...i loved the word play on this, it had complexity and good vocab...nice topic too...keep spittin that ill shit namsayin...wahid
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damn, this was raw....
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The Beginning started out dope THen You continued on will illness to end it up with my fav. lines Quote:
Love this piece... they need to not sleep on this... one |
damn, that had some ill flow, good vocab.. not too much wordplay but I liked what wordplay was in there.. multies were sick..
for some people who, consider it cool to mark Rich a fool What, When, Where & Who gave you the permission too?"... I like that.. it sounded real smooth when I tried it myself.. nice work as usual.. |
ALL FEEDBACK IS APPRECIATED
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dope...mind state was on point on this shit...content was nice as well...flow was off the wall...but what i was feeling the most was the word play...nice drop...keep blessing the board
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thanks J... Peace
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This was dopeness Rich...tha begginin' was nice...But U juss went raw on this part...
"& constant riticule is so habitual, its become a bitch ritual for some people who, consider it cool to mark Rich a fool What, When, Where & Who gave you the permission too? that, in addition to, all this bull im forced to listen to its just sick and pitiful, these rules are set up just to limit you its dispicable, its become an issue to make life less hospitable" From tha begginin' of that to tha end of that part was juss raw as fucc...Keep it up man and get at me 'bout our collab...Peace |
thanks Mentill... I will get back to you
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nice spit dun,i liked howyou rewind to the start an shit,was clever...i know exactly how you feel sometimes nahmean...
changes to make, but those are risks not easy to take routines to break, but im just a fiend for mistake a feind for mistakes...god damn cat i know exactly how you feel...shit was nice evolve propz... bismillah |
Good looks... comments appreciated
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Forget Napping On Reality... You Are Really Napping On This!!!!!!!!
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no doubt,mes an narc get it all the time...cats aint willin to read nothing that aint there own it seems...and when they do they jsut pretendin they read it,nahmean,shits a down...
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You People Dont Know A Nice Peice When You Read It!!!!
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