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Khôi NguJin 01-18-04 12:18 AM

Stars - Sun n' The Moon
 
Pure elements - all evident when crystilized developing
Three of them - i'll relish em' - behaviors malevolent
Call it my glow - shine to remind - rewinding the time
Changing my range - all trapped in a cage - torn inside
- But these three things'll uplift in any occurance
I alway turn to em' - these moments of disturbance...


When I pray in my bed - release of the stress
Gaze through the sky roof no longer mislead
With change brought about - each star that blazes
With the trails left behind - which infact erases..
Thoughts along with it - my mentalities struck n'
That buck - I said fuck it eventually a ruckus
Just some tough love - tough luck - and just maybe
The black stary night life will ease of the crazies
Constellated youth - with a craving to save thee
When they're aligned correctly - they're what make me

The vision i'm seein' - just a glare in my views
Facts of life bleeding - ya'll won't fare in my shoes
Staring - i'm loose - the tension will ease back
My seeds increase - fuck crack n' that's that..
Layin back - stay low - if ya'll say so - i'm all pro
The rays - golden sequences' mine for the takin' yo..
As warmth spreads - the picture perfect baring
My wings spread - victorious - nothin' comparing
The sun may distract - i'll stay click clat
The blind may see - crippled'll walk - faulty shall fall..
A brighter day follows it all..

But this needs no explanations - it's always there
Guiding me in presence - never disappear
Fear left ancient - ain't debatin' - heart embraces
Not only that - the moon fills my soul infact -

But the elements all evident - make me whole - in that -
Whatever comes my ways abolished
All the faces stay astonished..

DªÖ 01-18-04 12:30 AM

yo great peice
first verse was great
lots of multis, dont give a shit about struct
its great anyways.
real personal or so u make it seem.
9/10
keep that shit up.
great peice.


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