Peep And Review
 

ok, tryin sumthin different, hopefully wont get completely dissed
actually put some effort and time into this one

www.soundclick.com/sdizzlerecords

:laugh: Dude....no offense....but take that Absolute Fire deal off you site.....I dunno who the hell was rappin....but man...u was mumblin...and it was all off-beat....and u tried a free and screwed up....tried pickin it up....man.....sorry dude........

The medicine beat......i just dont feel it.......

But absolute fire was absolute shit........ :nono:


www.soundclick.com/tripmarxx

any song i made with lyrics i didn't have a program to play the beat at the same time i recorded, so any song i made i spit acapella and tried to blend it into the best

^Lmao...Then Don't Do Audio Dumbass...

Sdizzle...Its Time That I Told You The Ugly Truth...
Your Beats Are Not Good...So You Should Give It Up...
This Beat Is Terrible...Its Like You Have No Sense Of Melody At All...
It Is Irritating, And Repetitive...
Once Again...Your Instruments Suck...

QUIT NOW...!

No musician starts off perfect. If some of the top producers in the game were told to quit right off the bat, then just think of the beats we never would have heard. I listened to a few of the tracks, and while they weren't all that great, I hear potential. I don't know how long you've been doing this, sdizzle, but greatness takes time. The first thing I would advise you to do is to look for better sounding instrumentals, then listen to a whole bunch of beats by whoever your favorite producer is, and just try to get a feel for their work.

Just some advice! :thumbup:

-DCT

He Has Been Doing Beats For Quite Some Time Now...
And He Doesn't Seem To Take Our Advice...

well all u can do is give the kid advice...if he dun take it then he aint gonna elevate simple...

I Tried Giving Him Advice Dumbass...

And we have a new signature ladies and gentleman

wwow..im literally in awe@this beat...

shit is banannas dog... mad props

ive been making betas since like the middle of january

absolute fire...man im sry it was just funny.... your kidding right... the lyrics i can actually understand r garbage... and the beat is crap...please stop posting shit... go to the audio help fourm and try to learn how to make something respectable.. stop wasting our time... when u elevate come back..sry but its the truth

of this year?

ok sdizzle

first tip : get in contact with someone who is willing to give you cool edit pro, so you can actually play the beat and rap to it.

Second tip: do not rap over your own beats, b/c your the only one that thinks they are hot. go download some beats and rap over them.

third tip: listen to someone elses beats. do you hear the "kick, Kick, snare......kick,snare" pattern? well yours goes "kick,snare,snare,snare,snare.......snare,snare" and that sounds shitty. go listen to some jam master jay beats (Run-DMC) and listen how the drums go. thats what a basic hip hop drum pattern should sound like.

Fourth and final tip: make a new alias, and start posting good beats with it. it seems like you got fruity loops, clicked a whole bunch of shit on each pattern, and saved it as mp3. it doesnt work that way. you have to feel the music man

and thats all i gotta say

as of right now your shit is garbage.....just another laugh for people at RB....

as of the future you could be making dope beats, if you just try

we all have to work our way up

it just seems as if your at the bottom of the hole