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Verbal Abuse vs J.R. Freeze
Battle Rules:
10-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-30-04 at 01:46 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 01:18 PM.
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Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-04 01:18 PM.
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My shit is BRUTAL~and~VICIOUS...In this battle jR's like a "CHEMIST" doing~DIVISION//
Cause I'm Quick to make you HEAD "DIVIDE" quicker than NUCLEAR~FISSION// (Nuclear Fission DIVIDES Atoms) They say you “SEEK~YOU~SHALL~FIND” , but you’ve Sayin *your straight* is just DAMN~DISHONEST, Cause this *faggot* gives *guys* more *rim jobs* than SLAM~DUNK~CONTESTS!!!// You got no skill, so your *LINES* are like *FAT JOE'S SPANDEX* the way you *STRETCH~YO~SHIT*// Against jR, you couldn't even *"STEAL" A WIN* if your name was *RICKY ~HENDER~SON~*// (he holds the record for "stolen" bases) The *DAY YOU WERE BORN* is the only time you been *STUCK~IN~COOCHIE*// Think you can *BEAT ME?* you must be *MINNIE MOUSE* in an *AFFAIR*, cause you just *FUCKIN' GOOFY*// (LOL! THINK!) You must lace yo rhymes with *ANESTETIC* cause I *DON'T FEEL IT*, so your murder will be *~PAINLESS~*// Cause you remind me of a *HOMO SPACEMAN* the way you like getting *FUCKED* in *~URANUS~*// (your anus) |
jr freeze:
i had one of these last week at dairy queen. should've declined, i dont want murder scores on ma rec. ya only hard under ya threads, thats cause ya talkin to a vet. soon to be forgotten, ya like ice crushed quick under pressure. when i step, ya get grounded. like my son, ya lectured. your a rook, in my eyes ya trash when ya talk like ya heavy. my seenless hook rocked you. like nas, i proved ya lost already. this beef ya dont want, you should've ducked like the bush campaign. said youd rape me. but like portopotees, i left ya tooch in viens. well, times up. ya seem consumed, overwhelmed and confused. i guess you can say verbal left amused... ps: write back, sincerely abused |
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like he said. get some votes. no sleeping.
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
I think that Verbal Abuse got this battle because i feel that Verbal Abuse came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Verbal Abuse got it they were used effectifely and were on point J.R u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Verbal Abuse good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Verbal Abuse and flow and structure i'll give to Verbal Abuse. V/Verbal Abuse There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly |
Voted For: Verbal Abuse
verbal abbuse took it... multies: j.r. freeze wordplay:VB flow:VB structure:VB JR Freeze: didnt make much sense...nice try though...that woulda won it against a lot of other people... Verbal Abuse: nice drop overall...good punches...nice flow... V/ verbal abuse |
Voted For: Verbal Abuse
VB took this one with better structure and wordplay. also his punches were stronger... JR- you had stretched lines, which leads to poor structure, but dont get me wrong, yo punches were still ill, but i dont htink they were consistent. VB-yo had some nice creativitie in yo verse, and yo rhyming were different, i like that, u also took rhyming...JR took multi category...but this wasnt that close, i think VB took this one easily..but good shit both yall return tha HONEST vote on battle in sig |
This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse
well......... ahhh i unno y this battle is 3-0..... kinda close but i thought JR took it with all the punches. but i cant vote.. so checkin polls
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
good personals, flow was good but verbal's was better. Im not felling the whole minnie mouse thing even thoe that shit was funny . Good word Play like the whole slam dunk shit |
Jr you did have stretched lines... but still i think you won
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
Damme this was a pretty hott battle by both,.. This was the hottest I have seen JR... But you didn't get much info on VA coz if you did you would know that he is a she lol so to me some of the punches didn't hit as hard... You need to look in to this shit... Best punch VA: this beef ya dont want, you should've ducked like the bush campaign. said youd rape me. but like portopotees, i left ya tooch in viens. well, times up. ya seem consumed, overwhelmed and confused. i guess you can say verbal left amused... ^The close from VA was sicck, great flow, hott vocab hard hitting punches hott word play... JR Best punch: My shit is BRUTAL~and~VICIOUS...In this battle jR's like a "CHEMIST" doing~DIVISION// Cause I'm Quick to make you HEAD "DIVIDE" quicker than NUCLEAR~FISSION// (Nuclear Fission DIVIDES Atoms) ^ I was feeling this punch hit hard like the wordplay.. hott vocab decent flow... But you should write the explenations after the verse coz it messes up your structure little bit of advise. VA won this battle with hard hitting punches great vocab great structure... JR come dope dont get me wrong man your shits elevate a lot, just a few of the personals u tried to use didn't hit like I said before. wordplay was great flow ok could have been better punches nice. Stay up both... Please hit a battle up in my sig... 1~ |
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