LYRICAL PRODIGY vs LYRICAL SOLJA
Check In By WENSDAY Or Topic Wont Be Given Poems Due By FRIDAY NITE 12 PM EASTERN TIME. Edit You Link With At Least 2 Other Poetry Battles In The League You Voted On Voting Ends At 12 Eastern TimeON WENSDAY NITE NEXT WEEK.no Line Length And Dont Write A Topical. This Is A Poetry League I Will Dq You If You Write A Fucking Topical I Hate That Shit Its Not Poetry!!Gotta Actually Win Good Luck To BotH
YOUR DROP IS EXTENDED UNTIL MONDAY NITE AT 1159PM EASTERN TIME SORRY I FORGOT TO GIVE YALL A TOPIC SO THE TOPIC IS-FAST LIFE |
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Livin life in the fast lane
Young kids enterin the thug game Not knowin thats completely insane If they fail, our tears show the pain We feel when their blood is washed away by rain Then we take a look at the flip side When young girls' hopes and dreams are cast aside It's amazing how well they try and hide Their disappointment but then they find new pride When their child first sees the light So who are we to judge the right path When different people have a different grasp On the life they lead, whether it be slow or fast |
Yo the fast life,
Stabs like a dull knife, as i say good by, *zoom* good night, Fast is Regretfull, Life is what a havent, and i got a handfull, nothing is relevent, fore this life quick, this roller coaster makes me sick, in all a whole, i dont need to be told, life to quick to fold, this is not poker, this is life on a different token, as the pressure of this life leaves me broken. |
umm wow...thats all I can say about Solja's poem
That was really bad, I'm not gunna lie, I didn't see anything good in it. Prodigy came with some idea and it was by far the better poem I don't think I have to say much more vote/Lyrical Prodigy |
both poems sucked smh .. both were waaaaaaaaaaaaaay too simplistic poetry is supposed to be filled with emotion imagery all intertwined in metas and such and here i didnt see any .. the topic sucked too fast life smh .. but my vote goes to lyrical prodigy i think he kinda grasped the topic better .. lyrical solja tried to hard to be deep but wasnt at all ..
vote-prodigy |
i agrre lyrical prodigy won this hands down and this the last day for votes battles go up tonight!!
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prodigy wins...................................
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