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no hate..d/r
usual rules
8-12 lines

U spittin first

gud luk

YUP

CHecked in
ready for war
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Manipulation

Now U startin-ta-wild..oUt??who U foolin'??..wit ya' "lethal" rage/
You should be stored in a INCUBATOR..U still in a "fetal stage"//
this pussy is like a condom he's used to having a dick inside///
coz im known for eating more emcees in COLD BLOOD then soccer players in "alive"/ //(that movie "alive")
i'll "knock" ya' BACK-IN-TIME ..have U Crucified next-ta'-Jesus/
tortured with Jewz..clapped with Kennedy..vexxed-wit-Caesar//
diss-tort..diss-mantle ya'.."hold" ya' back..i'll Snatch-ya-spine/
You a perfect 10??..No B!tch..ya' AZZ-a-Nine{assinine}//
thrust ya nose bridge into your skull till u can blow it with brain-tissue/
get protection ur fucked!! bitch faggot i cum-sick/
ya best chance against me is to no show coz ya scripts is weak u dumb-bitch!!!/""

That was a fast one for ya
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Eye Could have done better

NO SHOW and wasted a decent verse

THATS BULL MAN

HE OUGHT TO GET DQD or sum shit

I HATE NO FUCKING SHOWS

WTF?......aiight chil
 

aight freestyle...cnt fuck wit dis bitch...


who the fuck you think you are callin me a no-show?...
your punches bout as personal as the oprah winfrey show!..
i leave u like england.. you the hurricane that never blow..
dawg..u belong in tha toilet..so u can get ur "shit" to flow!..
truth is im the clliff,step to me blinded..and ur set to fall..
more filler in your verse..than my hanging bathroom wall!..
why you saying HE should get dq`d?..dawg im a bitch!..
i murder u so bad..they should hang me..for being a WITCH!..
i think your two-faced..they should call you casta-troy..
jus like pearl harbour,i leave you like your fleet, destroyed!..
now ive left u defeated..ima turn around, L.M.F.A.O and go...
face it"ice-pick"..u coulnt break through me if i was only snow!.

that sucked and it took you days to write that shit
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Weak and wack go eat ya fucking big mac

hahaha.................it didnt suck u retard...and it took 15mins.lmfao.....

jus up 4 votes.......
frontin aint gona get u the win
mr"""/.,$£%^$^.i like to try polish a wack versehaha

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manipulation had a good opener and flow seemed good, there was a great personal at the end which just "melted ice pick"
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